Edit: Okay so I know I said this was going to be the last one before this one, but well, I just got a sad review from a fan and now i'm in a predicament. So I'm going to try and see if I could possibly still post up the new version every now and then and still be able to have it published when i am comfortable with it and find a publisher as well. So hopefully i could get the new version, i just need to look for it somewhere. if not then maybe i could give you guys little snippets and previews of the story. so this will not be the end of it on here. it'll just be on a little hiatus until i get things found out and sorted out.