Maelstrom the Pokegirl Master
Life did exist after death for those who were gifted. It also was for those bestowed with gifts or curses. In that case Uzumaki Naruto had fit that criteria. He wasn't sure how many decades or centuries had passed during his journey, but his mind felt the weariness of of an existence beyond one's lifetime.
This world, this strange new world he found himself in was ripe with opportunities he had grown to enjoy. The most abudant being the ability to pursue carnal pleasure to his delight while as well gaining power. Naruto had remembered when he first awoken one morning and found himself in the bed of a small cabin. It looked abandoned if the condition of the wood and smell was any indication. He looked around to see a girl walked through the door. She was a beautiful young woman about age fifteen or sixteen. Her skirt looked fair, maybe a hint of creaminess. She was about 5'6 or 5'7 in height. She was wearing a black tank top that contained her sizable bust. She was also wearing a pink miniskirt that hung casually off her long legs. Her eyes were a darker shade of blue then his, along with her hair which she kept worn under a white cap. She also wore black knee-high shocks and pink boots.
''I see you're awake that's good. Do you remember what happened?''
''Yeah...more or less I got into a fight with an old adversary and more or less the force of our attacks must have knocked me out.''
''My Foxxsea found you floating down a river. You were quite lucky.''
Naruto raised an eyebrow. ''A river? I was nowhere near a river. Though that doesn't surprise me considering my luck.''
The girl smiled, ''My name is Dawn by the way? What's yours?''
''Naruto Uzumaki...excuse me but you said your Foxxsea found me earlier?''
''Yeah my Pokegirl?''
''You must have hit your head.''
''Most likely, care to refresh my memory? I'm feeling a bit hazy.''
''I'll start from the beginning then. It all started with this master of technology and magic called Sukebe. He being a mage, scientist, and pervert created an army of powerful female weapons and slaves call Pokegirls. He caused an invent which has been named Sukebe's revenge killing millions, leaving near all the female sterile, and other horrible things. A pokegirl is a female creature with special powers, an impressive libido, and a natural psychology to submit to a "master." Some were human females who have undergone Threshold and transformed. All pokegirls have some sort of special ability, if not looks, that separate them from normal females. They were originally created by Sukebe as super-soldiers. Though during the course of the war it was discovered that people could make Pokegirls loyal to them giving birth to tamers.''
''The Pokegirls owner or partner, depends how you look at them. You capture them then train and tame them for various things like combat or everyday life. Because of their libido they need to be tamed or engage in sex in order to prevent them from becoming feral. When Pokegirls become feral they become very animalistic to the point of becoming wild beasts.'' Dawn went on to explain how the world was united by the war, the famous San Bay battle where energy weapons were first created and the beginning of tamer forces and how tamers still exist today to tame feral pokegirls.
''Wow...this place would be heaven to so many people I know.''
''Huh?'' She asked cocking her head.
''Nothing...but this sounds interesting.'' That and an army of super sexy soldiers would definitely kick ass to have.
Naruto looked at Dawn. "Where do I sign up to be a tamer?" asked Naruto.
''You certainly became interested quick.''
''Just want to do my part and besides, this sounds like something I can get into.''
''Well you have to come to a lab and upload your data. You're going to need a license, Pokedox, some pokeballs and a few other things.'' Dawn had led him to a lab a few miles east of their location.
It took a few hours for Naruto to set up everything. He needed to set up birth records, schooling, family, medical history, all which had to be falsified, but for the most part was truthful. Not like anyone in this world could you it against him. Naruto was then handed a black Pokedex and checked his information.
Name: Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze
Age: 18 (It was his physical age more or less)
Date of birth 10/10/ 292 AS
Next of Kin: N/A
Tamer license: y
Master license : n
Researcher license: n
Breeder license: n
Naruto frowned as he went over the information. He was going to have to make a few changes so everyone and anyone couldn't basically discover his future harem with a mere scan and try to take advantage. After being set up Naruto decided to take Dawn aside and explained to her some key concepts about who he really was. He hoped the girl wouldn't freak out. She was pretty cute and he hate to have to kill her.
Naruto walked out of the path with Dawn along side him. ''So? Where are you heading from here?'' She asked as he shrugged.
''I don't know...I don't know a thing about this world.''
''Then...maybe you could travel with me,'' She said hopefully. ''It's gets a little lonely.''
''You have Pokegirls right?'
''Just one...I've only been a tamer a little over six months now. I'll show you,'' She took one of her Pokeballs out of her backpack and pushed the button in the front causing it to enlarge. ''Come on out...Foxxsea,'' She said giving a twirl and tossing the ball.
The light on Naruto's pokedex started beeping. He opened it and scanned the Pokegirl.
FOXXSEA, the Water Fox Pokegirl
Type: Near Human - Animorphic (vulpine)
Diet: omnivore, preference for fish and meat
Role: calm and relaxing influence, antithesis to the Vixxen
Strong Vs: Fire, Rock, Water
Weak Vs: Electric, Ice, Plant
Attacks: Quick Attack, Scratch, Bubbles, Water Gun, Water Barrier, Cry, Disable (Lv. 30), Teleport (Lv. 40)
Enhancements: Enhanced Hearing (x4), Enhanced Olfactory Sense (x4), Enhanced Agility (x4), Minor Psychic Capabilities, Hydrokinesis, Constant Aura of Calm
Evolves From: Kitsune (Water Stone)
It is certain that a Tamer that trains and Tames a Kitsune regularly will see definite improvement in her capabilities and overall strength. However, most Tamers aren't patient enough and want a big bang as fast as possible. This normally means the Tamer would acquire a Fire Stone as soon as possible to Evolve the Kitsune into a more powerful form. However, not everyone wants a Pokégirl that are after and ready for Taming anytime, anywhere, under any conditions with anyone at the drop of the hat. For those Tamer, there is hope. With the use of a Water Stone, an incredible change comes over the Kitsune and she evolves into a much calmer and surprisingly less horny vulpine pokégirl: Foxxsea.
The Foxxsea is indeed a rare evolutionary path of the Kitsune, what with the Vixxen being considered the default evolutionary path, not to mention that the majority of Tamers prefer the flash and raw power that comes with owning a Fire-type Pokégirl. Still, even without as large a fan-following, the presence of a Foxxsea is nothing to sneeze at.
While she is not a Psychic-type, a Foxxsea has an unusually high intelligence and E.S.P. ratings, allowing her to tap into a number of Psychic-type techniques as she grows in levels of power, allowing her to support her solid repertoire of water-based techniques. And even better, these psychic powers even strengthen her primary element as the first thing that develops is Hydrokinesis, allowing the Foxxsea access to a nearly limitless amount of water anywhere on the planet.
One of the most important psychic capabilities of the breed is that the Foxxsea has a calming effect on her Tamer thanks to the constantly generated technique Aura of Calm. Thanks to this psychic rapport, a Foxxsea can allow her Tamer to never be surprised or incapacitated by fear or anger. This also allows her to calm more easily agitated and excitable Pokégirls, including their sister species of Vixxen.
When it comes to the looks of a Foxxsea, one should understand that the build is very similar to a Vixxen. 4'10" to 5'8" in height, bust ranging from a large B-Cup to a solid C-Cup, and a large fluffy and incredibly soft tail. However, unlike the Vixxen, the coloration of the Foxxsea is either blue or sea-green, with the fringes of her hair giving the coloration and effect of looking like white sea-foam. Eye color correlates to the color of her fur, albeit a shade or two darker.
When it comes to Taming, one shouldn't be surprised that it is often a gentle experience. Where the Vixxen can handle sex any which way possible with great enthusiasm, a Foxxsea initiates Taming in a more reserved, yet definitely intimate way. No one that has Tamed a Foxxsea can say anything bad about the experience, and some say they've even found it surprisingly refreshing. The Aura of Calm is a definite blessing in this case and neither the Tamer nor the vulpine Pokégirl are pushed hard during their time Taming together, finding themselves just going with the flow.
There has yet to be a single recorded case of a girl going through Threshold to become a Foxxsea. It would seem that the more common branches of vulpine Pokégirls, the Vulvixx, Kitsune, and Vixxen will remain dominant for quite some time until more Foxxsea are bred and bare children via natural sexual reproduction than through parthenogenesis.
A word of warning for Tamers and Pet Owners that decide to keep a Foxxsea. It is suggested to keep them away from any alcoholic beverages. As for what happens when they drink some... you really, REALLY do not want to know.
''Impressive,'' He whistled as Dawn scratched the back of her head and grinned sheepishly. ''Well I put a lot of time and experience into her when she was a Kitsune,'' She said a she gazed at the 5'3 Foxx-sea proudly. The light blue skinned Foxx-sea yawned.
''Mistress? Do you require my services?''
''Not at the moment Seava...I just wanted to introduce you to our new companion. He just became a tamer and he's going to be traveling with us,'' She said as the Foxxsea turned to Naruto.
''Hello Tamer, I am Seava the Foxxsea.''
''Hey there, my name is Naruto. Looking forward to see what you can do. Hopefully I get my own pokegirl soon.''
''Ok Seava...that's it...you can return now,'' Dawn said recalling her Seava back to the ball. ''Well let's head on to the next town shall we?''
''Right...after you?'' He said following after the girl. This was going to be an interesting journey.
Today was the day that Naruto would acquire his first Pokegirl. He and Dawn had set camp and turned in early so they would get a good night's rest. After that they packed up their camping gear and made way through the forest. They had traveled 27 Kilometers into the forest before taking a break at a makeshift camp site, obviously made by a previous traveler. After collecting some branches and leaves Naruto ignited a small fire, placing a barrier of rocks around it.
Dawn had returned with a kettle of water and set it on the fire to heat so they could brew tea. They then went over their rations. They had enough food for three days before they would restock. There was enough fresh water in their canteens for four days as well.
''So Dawn...I'm curious...why did you become a tamer?'' Naruto asked, breaking the silence.
''Because of my mother...my mother is a well known tamer and I wanted to follow in her foot steps. I also wanted to travel and see the world. Unless your a training or a military personal it isn't exactly safe traveling alone.''
''I see...it's strange don't you think?'' He asked as the girl adorned a quizzical look.
''That we've traveled this far in and we've yet to encounter another tamer or even a feral pokegirl. I don't like this...''
''Maybe we should look around then,'' Dawn said as she summoned her Foxxsea from the Pokeball. ''Me and Seava will search both to the east and south of our position for the third of a kilometer and well leave the west and north up to you. That sound ok?''
''Right...we'll meet back in an hour then,'' Naruto said as he went to the west. Naruto took careful notice of any signs of disturbed land. He didn't notice any humanoid footprints. When it came to Pokegirls he was unsure of all the tracks to discern from. Some of the tracks looked fresh. Maybe they belong to wild animals? Naruto continued until he came across a cliff side. He focused chakra into his eyes and looked towards the bottom noticing what looked like the shredded remains of a backpack. Something definitely wasn't right. He noticed movement and trailed down the mountain.
He then noticed what was curled around what looked like human remains was a Pokegirl. He took out his Pokedex.
KITSUNE, the Mischievous Fox Pok girl
Type: Anthropomorphic (vulpine)
Diet: omnivore, preference for fish and meat
Role: domesticated Pokegirl
Strong Vs: Ghost, mouse Pokegirls, bird Pokegirls
Weak Vs: Fighting, dog Pokegirls
Attacks: Scratch, Bite, Pummel, Leap, Tackle, Psychic Illusion, Ember
Enhancements: Enhanced Speed and Agility (x2), Enhanced Hearing (x4) Enhanced Olfactory Sense (x4)
Evolves: Vixxen (Fire Stone), Foxxsea (Water Stone), Hoarfoxx (Water Stone and arctic conditions), Nogitsune (personal dishonor; loss of tail), Psivyx (Psi Crystal)
Evolves From: Vulvixx (normal or Fox E-Medal)
A Pokegirl based on the pre-Sukebe animal known as a fox, this Pokegirl was designed to create confusion in the ranks of the human armies. One of the first of the mass-produced breeds due to her relatively simple genetic code, the Kitsune was distinctive for the bushy tail that is about two feet long and the vulpine-like muzzle on their faces. However, numerous accounts are known of the Kitsune assuming human forms with their Illusion and Psychic Illusion techniques to bring confusion to most any human command structure.
There has been some confusion in the centuries since, as the Vulvixx was discovered. The Vulvixx, a Fire-type, evolves into the Kitsune, which is a Normal-type, and then evolves in one of many directions (although, admittedly, most include a fire-type in the evolutions). Research remains ongoing into this particular phenomenon, but it's widely considered to be a genetic quirk, and nothing else.
The Kitsune, or fox Pokegirl, is a common form for girls undergoing Threshold to evolve to. Like the Eva, it has multiple evolutionary tracks but is not high powered in its base form. Kitsunes are highly mischievous and delight in innocently causing trouble (no malicious intent), such as taking pictures of embarrassing situations and posting or selling them, inciting romantic triangles from both sides, enjoying the good life and stiffing total strangers with the bill, etc. It's this particular trait that kept them from being targeted widely by anti-Pokegirl organizations, as even they realize and understand a good joke when they see one (or can at least find a use for the Kitsune, one way or the other). They also make great pets, as most Kitsune are rather intelligent and are proficient in the kitchen and at household chores, though do well with children also. Just be sure to keep an eye on them so they don't teach the children how to play pranks on their parents.
Despite not being a fire-type, the Kitsune does have access to an array of elemental techniques to assist in their mischief. Not especially great in either sex battles or standard battles, the Kitsune are often evolved quickly when found in a combat harem. These Pokegirls have a slight quirk, however: despite their mischievous nature, every Kitsune chooses their own rules and code to live by- whether it be as simple as never allowing her tamer to be harmed, to never harming a child. If their rule, or code, is broken by a certain measure (by choice or accident), this often triggers the evolution into a Nogitsune, which all Kitsune dread with a passion. Kitsune get along well with Trixies and other Pokegirls that enjoy playing jokes on others, and it is not recommended to have two or more pranksters in a single harem as they will constantly attempt to outdo one another.
(Note: Name is taken from Japanese fox-spirit which are highly mischievous.)
The Pokegirl flinched as she looked up at him with tear stained eyes. Naruto accessed the body and placed the time of death about three to five days ago. He then looked at the Kitsune who looked quite thin. It was obvious the Pokegirl was distraught and in pain. Someone had killed her master and she basically had given up on life.
''It's ok...I want hurt you...'' He said reaching out to the guarded Pokegirl. She closed her eyes and flinch as his hand stroke her head. The Vulpine's bushy two foot tail wrapped around her torso. Naruto was able to relax and calm down the Pokegirl. Soothing her enough to where she fell asleep he brought her back to the camp site.
"I'm sorry Naruto but I didn't see any other Pokegirl around." Dawn said a she and Foxxsea returned to the site. ''Where did she come from?''
''I found this Kitsune by human remains. Someone killed her master,'' He stated as Dawn gasped in horror.
''Oh you poor thing...Naruto, what do you plan on doing?''
''I'm going to take her with me...when she wakes up I'm going to offer her to be my Pokegirl.''
''I see...whoever did this...''
''Could still be close by. That's what I was able to figure from the body so we need to be careful. For now on if either of us heads anywhere the other follows.''
''R-Right...I suppose we should start cooking now...'' Dawn said, taking out some of the remainder of the food.
Naruto softly brushed the cheek of the sleeping Kitsune. Whoever was responsible was going to pay.
I hope you guys liked my chapter one revision. Sorry it took so long to update. I'm think I'm finally getting the feel of doing a Pokegirl story. Let me know what you guys think? I know you have all been waiting forever for me to really write this story, but I feel by this point my writing has gotten much better. Let me know whatcha think?
Also this story is still seperate from the Unleashed series and also takes place in a parallel world. In this world takes place in the far future of not only Naruto's world, but many others which will feature the reincarnation of many characters. More will be elaborated on at a later date.
List of girls.
Succubus: Kurumu (Original)
Bunnygirl evolved into ? :Usagi Tsukino
Ronin: Motoko Ayonama
A-Bra to Alaka-wham: Jean Grey
Shadowcat: Kitty Pryde
Tomboy to Pirouette: Akane
Gemini-Shion and Hinata
Review Responses-For each chapter I do I will respond to that Reviews responses.
2010-12-04 . chapter 1
awwww poor pokegirl
She'll get her revenge soon enough. Until then loving and healing will do.
2010-11-27 . chapter 1
check my OC out on my profile
I will on a later date.
2010-09-22 . chapter 1
Any lemons gonna be in this?
2010-09-17 . chapter 1
awsome story! there just aren't enough pokegirl fanfics out there, and here you are filling the void! thank you so much and i hope this turns out to be epic length!
It will. I have plan's for a Legendaries Arc and a Gym Leader Arc
The First Kitsukage
2010-08-18 . chapter 1
I'm a kage of few words... Hiragana?...
Incorrect translation. Has been changed to Tentai
2010-08-17 . chapter 1
word of advice..UPLOAD PICS OF THESE POKEGIRLS PLEASE XX:
that or get a example from Moemon...
I don't have a computer and I use the schools and most Pokegirl pics are pornographic so I can't get them. Besides I give descriptions and you have the name so you can look them up to get a general idea.
2010-07-08 . chapter 1
i say a Kunoichi and a Samurai
I'll get to them on a later date.
2010-06-30 . chapter 1
Well, bunnygirl sounds cute!
Aside from that, it seemes okay so far.
Definite plans for a Bunnygirl
2010-06-08 . chapter 1
So a pokegirl story, hmm. I read that a nogitsune could become a kyuubi pokegirl at the end by giving it love so would be perfect for narutos personality. As for others, I vote for the kunoichi, thank you.
The ideas are under consideration.
usoku no akuma
2010-04-26 . chapter 1
cool story cant wait to see more of it. As for pokegirls:Arbust,Vixxen,and kunoichi. I have never seen an arbust in naruto's harem in these kinds of stories and i think it would be interesting
I'll consider it.
2009-10-12 . chapter 1
I'm thinking maybe a Penance or Cudildo would be a good first pokegirl for Naruto, considering his kind and caring nature, or maybe a Kunoichi or Kyuubi considering his past, possibly a Barriermaiden or Loner due to his drive to protect others.
Those are interesting ideas.
2010-04-09 . chapter 1
nice start on story & i hope you are going to update soon.
As for pokegirls: Kitsune/Bunnygirl/Vixxen
2010-03-16 . chapter 1
dude nice story man. i love almost all of ur crossovers man and i would be honored to write one with u. pm me if u like.
Contact me in my Forum
2010-01-26 . chapter 1
Nice start! I'm really looking forward to Naruto and Dawns adventures, both violent and erotic ;). As for the poll I would really like to see Naruto have a Nogitsune as its evolved form, Dark Kitsune, is my absolute favorite pokegirl. I also think she would work well with Naruto in that she is a fox, but even more so that as a Nogitsune she has been through some trauma, something Naruto can relate to. However, I don't like the idea of Nogitsune being Naruto's first pokegirl. Nogitsune are quite strong and I'd like to see Naruto start off with something a little less powerful. Also, due to the trauma and the loss of their tail, Nogitsune are supposed to be quite a handful, and I don't want to see Naruto magically cure her of her attitude problem in an instant. I want to see it happen at a decent pace, not glacier slow, but not instantaneous. Doing this would make it difficult to introduce any other pokegirl for awhile. So I think it would be best to get a starter, do a little development, and then get a Nogitsune. For the starter, I'd like to see a Kunoichi. She'd be a ninja, giving Naruto some common ground and quite a bit to teach her. I've also been playing Disgaea 3 lately, and the kunoichi Kyoko there has really caught my eye. Here's a pic if you aren't familiar with Disgaea:
I decided to bring in a Nogitsune later on.
2009-10-12 . chapter 1
nice chapter. im glad to see this story back up
i was thinking either a dragon/magic type(if possible, and i cant check, since my dad is right behind me)or a fighting/psychic or steel, like medicham or lucario in the pokemon series
2009-11-28 . chapter 1
how about a KUNIMITSU it would be perfect and when he gets
Nogitsune it is only a couple of steps till it is a kubi and that is a very powerful poke'girl border line Legendary if you need info for poke'girls and that a like I know a couple of web sites
KUNIMITSU, the Vulpine Ninja Pokégirl
Type: Near Human, cases of Animorph (Vulpine)
Frequency: Very Rare
Diet: omnivore, prefers human style food
Role: spy, sex-pot
Strong Vs: Dark, Ghost, Psychic
Weak Vs: Bug, Fighting, sex attacks
Attacks: Scratch, Bite, Pummel, Leap, Tackle, Slash, Dark Blade Mark II, Smoke Screen, Vanish, Dart Toss (shuriken), Fox Fire
Enhancements: Enhanced Stealth, Enhanced Hearing (x3) and Enhnaced Olfactory Sense (x3)
Evolves From: Kunoichi (Fox E-Medal), Ninjette (Fox E-Medal)
Kunimitsu is a special animorphic variation of the Kunoichi. When a Kunoichi is given a Fox E-Medal, a transformation comes over her. She becomes similar to a Kitsune, but with greater variation. A Kunimitsu's fur will be a creamy white, or a light blonde. They also have a tendency to wear clothing of their pre-evolved form, with tight cloth, and shawls around their muzzle. They find the tight clothing excellent for gaining high-speeds while running, AND they get a kick out of the feeling of tight clothing pressing against their bodies.
It should be noted that while a Kunimitsu does not have the levels of stamina or endurance that Kitsunes and Vixxens are known for, (which some Tamers are thankful for, as some have trouble with over-affectionate Vixxens) a Kunimitsu is far more dexterous, and can slip into tight places that Kitsune usually can't. Some are known to even have slightly collapsible bone-structures, like a Titmouse, letting them get into places that are a tight squeeze.
There is also a special historical event behind the Kunimitsu that makes them slightly more revered than their pre-evolved form of Kunoichi. In 249 AS, a year after Mao's Rebellion had begun, the Edo League was endangered when a shadow group of a Kunoichi had threatened to overthrow the League in the name of Mao Shin Mao. One Kunoichi, however, stood in their way. While the shadow group was raiding a rich man's estate, the noble's Pokégirl, a Kunoichi, tried to pull her injured master to safety, hiding him in the basement, where she accidentally came into contact with a case of her master's E-Medal collection, specifically, a Fox E-medal. The change that overcame her seemed to have changed her perception on the situation, filling the Pokégirl with more bravado and courage. Using her skills and new techniques to actually over-take most of the rebellious Kunoichis, the one major Pokégirl anarchist group was taken down before they reached the main part of the Edo League on it's Eastern-most island. The Edo League flourished a lot more easily than other Leagues were able to during the timeframe because of that. As such, that one Kunimitsu was highly revered, and other Kunimitsu are given more respect when in the Edo League than the pre-evolved form of Kunoichi.
Fighting wise, a Kunimitsu tries to be sneaky, and hit hard from a distance, like other Kunoichi. However, when the situation calls for it, a Kunimitsu can change her tactics to more traditional hand-to-hand combat. Her technique of "Fox Fire" (a flame technique that vulpine Pokégirls in the Edo League can learn) seems to be her favorite move in its assortment of techniques to use for close-up combat.
During Taming, a Kunimitsu is quite different from what one would expect from a vulpine Pokégirl. Shy, quiet, and demure are all good ways to describe how the Pokégirl acts. The Kunimitsu will not beg her master for Taming if he does not want it. And during Taming sessions, a Kunimitsu is more passive, allowing her master to do with her as he would please. This leaves a Kunimitsu open to take in all sorts of pleasure. Unfortunately this can be used against her, as her threshold of pleasure seems diminished. In a sex battle, a Kunimitsu almost becomes almost as poor a choice as a Titmouse, because of a need to submit to pleasure.
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