Maelstrom the Pokegirl Master
I will be using nearly all suggestions in the over 200 reviews I have received. Sorry it took so long, but of course I'm finally sorting things out and I promise to try and not keep you guys waiting anymore. For the sake of time and not boring you guys I'm skipping the event of where Dawn would have caught her next Pokegirl and moving on to the plot, but with a large emphasis on training first.
Now in Pokegirl or Pokemon stories or even the anime I'm sure it only focuses on one character battling for most of the time in tournaments via Ash. In this story it will be mostly Naruto, but from to time I will give a share of focus to the people who travel with Naruto. Same thing via the Pokemon version of Misty actually keeping true to wanting to be a Master of Water Pokemon. With that said please enjoy!
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Starting until the end of Summer I'm going on another Hiatus. I will work on chapters for all my stories and the only story I'll be updating is the newly adopted, Malcolm Fox's Meg Boyfriend's series. I have also discontinued New Kyuubi because it falls under the very cliche, over-powered Naruto and bashing route. The same reason why I discontinued New Namikaze (I am going to reboot that one and make it better. I am not abandoning that one.) If it comes down to it, I might reboot New Kyuubi as well and change the premise. So yeah, don't think I've disappeared on you guys, I'm just going to be writing chapters for all my stories and I won't post any of them until after Summer is over. I think the reason I failed before is because I was incapable of not writing/keeping myself busy. But I'm going on this hiatus of sort to get away from this site.
I will still visit the forums, add story images, add stories to communities and answer PMs. I just won't be writing on Thursdays or Sundays anymore to help clear my head, regain my energy, and to take more time to go over all my stories, fix all the mistakes that have been pointed out, and to finally give you guys chapter by chapter break-downs, explanations, and other stuff by replacing old chapters with new ones. That means its going to be up to you guys to go back and start reading old chapters/stories. I say that because I'm not going to go place new chapters at the end of old chapters and delete the old chapters when it comes to rewrites like all my stories.
This hiatus is finally going to allow me the time to explain my thought process to you guys, my motivations, etc, etc.
I am also going to take this time to explore new fandoms, new main characters, and none Naruto related ideas that you guys will see, Upon August 27, when I head back to school. That will include outlines, special shout-outs to special reviewers, and stuff like that. I'm also going to still post the unrated version of the stuff I have on Ficwad, MediaMiner, and especially YourFanfiction in the mean. I implore you guys to go and join that last site, as I'm going to post special stories only on YourFanfiction that won't be found anywhere else.
Back-up your stories there, you may never know if yours my up and gone. For those of you who missed my Dom! Series. Its going to be up there. The continuation of the Memoir series, its going to be there. Also, I'm going to do several different Milf Hunter like series, which will only be found on YourFanfiction as well. Feel free to suggest. I want to think everyone who spent their time reading my fics and my messages.
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Once again I like to think you all and I'll officially see you again August 27.
Name: Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze
Age: 18 (It was his physical age more or less)
Date of birth 10/10/ 292 AS
Next of Kin: N/A
Tamer license: Y
Master license : n
Researcher license: n
Breeder license: n
PG1: Kitsune/Mei Lv:25
PG2: Boobisaur/Celine Lv:9
PG3: Buzzbreast/Suzembachi Lv: 1
PG4: Squirtitty/Hanabi Lv: 1
Name: Hikari 'Dawn' Heion (Tranquil) Which translates into Tranquil Dawn or Light
Date of birth 10/10/ 294 AS
Next of Kin: Mother: Johana
Tamer license: Y
Master license : n
Researcher license: n
Breeder license: n
PG1: Foxxsea/Seava: Lv: 12
PG2: Venomiss: Lv: ?
PG3: Polishag: Lv:?
Seven clones were created for training. Seven Narutos for the Pokegirl and one for Dawn who if she wanted to keep up was going to need some physical conditioning. With her it was a simple gaining of speed, strength, endurance, learning how to use a weapon and sharpening her senses. Being human it would take her some time, but they literally had all the time in the world.
The seven Pokegirls were gathered as Naruto finished using toad ink mixed with his blood to design some seals. Being that the Pokegirls had bodies engineered for war they didn't have to worry about the same muscle deterioration or bristling of bones that shinobi had to with gravity seals. Something reverse engineered from the practice of using said seals to make objects lighter for a training purpose.
Once the seals activated the Pokegirls dropped down to the ground as if they were hit with an Almighty Push from above. ''Step one is to get used to these weights. Once you do each of my clones will take one of you off for private training.'' he said as he lead Dawn away for private training.
With that said Mei was the first to recover so the first Naruto clone took her to another part of the forest. She was naturally a speedy type with enhanced senses and psychic abilities. She was strong against Ghost, Mouse, and Bird Type Pokegirls as a result. From what Dawn told him he knew only a hand full of trainers compared to the others focused on something other than levels of elemental type. Naruto, thinking back to his shinobi background knew that keeping information hidden and having other surprises were deadly. Pein's invasion of Konoha taught him that much and with Mei weak to fighting and dog types he needed to improve what she was weak in. While he couldn't do much for her weakness against dog types he could more than work on her weakness against fighting types.
''We're definitely going to improve your strength but weaknesses is something important to iron out.'' Naruto informed Mei.
''Okay! Ready when you are Naruto-sama!'' the Kitsune exclaimed with a bit of pep.
Naruto moved into a fighting stance. ''I decided I want to spend two months training all of you girls. I want to make you as strong as possible instead of just gaining strength and experience as we go. This is going to be what I can necessarily do with having a clone scout out our opponents, Gym leaders in mind ahead of time to learn their strategies and stuff. This of course won't be effective against traveling tamers or stuff who we won't be able to scout out ahead of time, but regardless the gathered strength and experience will be invaluable regardless. Today we're going to spar and I'm going to take notice in the weaknesses in your attacking style. I'm also going to make sure unlike every other Tamer that you will have strategies memorized for you to fight particular pokegirl and styles and how to read body language. Me shouting out what to do makes it to blatant for our opponents to figure out our entire strategy and counter, but I'm not expecting you to pick up on that by the time we get to the first gym.'' he informed her as he moved into a fighting position. Before the day was over Naruto was more than sure the seven women would be cursing him. Her bones would be toughened, her nails and teeth would be sharpen and she would be able to track her opponent's movement by sound alone.
''Alright Celine you have a long way to go.'' Naruto informed the pokegirl in an open field. He didn't want to necessarily burn down needless trees and plant life with fire and ice attacks. As a plant type her weaknesses to fire and ice were far too obvious. Then there was the obvious weakness to fighting types which he could rectify by having her learn long range techniques, which he was on the way of rectifying by using his resources as a Shinobi. To which he was sure being a plant type that Naruto could theoretically transfer to her some nature chakra for her to use jutsu. There was also the fact that as a long range fighter his Boobisaur wouldn't have much strength and as such he placed some seals on some rocks so she could practice building up her strength. Naruto's lack of both experience and knowledge, which would have been a set back for everyone else could be easily rectified by having his Pokegirl learn unconventional techniques to their species as a means to even the ground.
With Celine struggling to put some muscle on her arms now we were on to Suzembachi. Like Celine she also had a weakness towards flying and fire types, but with her Naruto was focusing on getting her to stand tall against her weakness.
''But Naruto-sama!'' the Buzzbreast buzzed/whined as she dodged out of the way of another fireball.
''I'm not going to hit you. At least not now Suzem-chan, you need to get used to fire. Our opponents are going to take advantage of your natural weakness so you have to get used to it. '' he explained as he ordered the reluctant Pokegirl back in place. He knew just how they felt; having a deep hatred of being hit by lightning based attacks for the obvious reason, but he wanted to make sure his girls would be ready. The same process of working out weaknesses were worked on Hanabi along with Dawn's Pokegirls as well. A week had passed and the Pokegirl were finally getting used to the next level of weight that Naruto upgraded two days ago.
''A week had passed and you've all surpassed my expectations.'' he stated, drinking newly brewed minted tea as the females beamed in pride. ''And as a reward you get to fight my clones. Survive until time runs out.'' he cheekily stated as he created five hundred clones for an all out brawl. As Naruto madly cackled the seven women were all having the same basic thought. 'Sadistic Master/Bastard.' By the time the afternoon rolled around the seven had collapsed and for a brief moment Naruto was afraid that Dawn was dead. The others were groaning, but she was just laying there and not moving at all. Though thankfully enough she alive, if her unconscious murderous thoughts wasn't enough of a clue.
A few more weeks had passed and Naruto took to sparring with each of them. Sometimes one on one and other times as a group effort like at this current moment, being informed terrorist organizations like Team Rocket would attack and attempt to steal his pokegirls. ''Keep your feet guarded.'' he instructed Celine as he sweep kicked her off her feet before jumping up and using his arm to block Mei's kick. ''A little less power, don't put everything you have in a single strike.''
Venomiss attempted to do an axe kick to which Naruto caught her foot with ease and flip her back with ease. ''Good,but needs more speed.'' being Pokegirls there growth rate were greater than that of normal shinobi by far which made all the training all the more apparent. By the time Naruto got to the final gym of the first Gum he was sure without a doubt he would have a game breaker team.
The months soon passed and satisfied with the progress the trainer duo continued their way to Route 3, which was situated between Pewtit City and the Western side of Mt. Moon.
''The town's Northern entrance is along the Route; the trade route is heavily fortified against Feral attacks is an important path of transit of goods from Pewtit City and Stone Town.'' Dawn remarked as she straightened out her skirt. ''It's going to take about a week on foot to make it to Pewtit city, but thankfully there is a Pokecenter towards the end where we can rest up. There is also a lake mill with water-wheel has become a watering-hole for the Feral breed.'' she remarked as Naruto merely scanned the area, searching for the best route to head.
''So what Pokegirls should we expect to encounter?''
''Well maybe Pidgy and Rack are quite common as well as Bunnygirls and there evolutions and maybe even Jigglysluts.'' she said as Naruto came a stop. The area ahead of them as a dry and sandy as your common desert. The blond beckoned her to ride his back as a result to cut down some time, but what would have been a day's worth of travel would only be cut down to three lest Naruto wanted Dawn to suffer whiplash from the sudden jerky movements that would have partake in traveling the landscapes. Only taking a break so Naruto could catch a a few Racks the duo settled down for the night.
The rhythmic crackle of the campfire filled the clearing as the group broke camp for the night. Darkness had descended quickly after capturing the Pokegirls and they found themselves at the perfect spot, the clearing having evidence of being a common camping spot. Based on the pile of scorched stone found at the base of a tree someone else had thought the same. The only other evidence of previous use was a circle of grass that must have been where the fire had been located as it was newer than the rest of the flora.
"Will you keep any of the girls we captured today?" Dawn asked watching as the flames seemed to dance as they tongued the late night air.
"Three Racks is a decent haul. I'm not sure which evolution path I want to choose and I'm sure adding a lightning or fire type to your variety would help.'' Naruto figured. ''At least until you find another Pokegirl better suited.'' Naruto remarked as he handed Dawn the pokeball.
''You know, I'm supposed to be the sempai yet you're the one practically giving me Pokegirls. I'm a big girl, I can fight and tame you know.'' she lightly jabbed as she poked him in the ribs with her elbow.
Naruto chuckled at Dawn's statements, ''Have it your way sempai. Regardless we should find some pokegirls that provide food and stuff. We're running low on supplies.'' she pointed out, bringing to attention they gained several Pokegirls but no food in the past few days. ''I mean not all of our Pokegirl has to be combat capable right from the outset. In order to obtain more powerful girls we'll need to find the appropriate base types at time as simple catching whatever happens to walk past without regard won't help in the end either."
''Yeah, but you never know when have more than one of the same Pokegirl can help. Can't ignore that, but I see what you mean. I want all my girls to fight along side of me. Getting close to someone and spending so much time with them only to have to put them in storage because they would be of no real use is something I want to avoid."
Some more time passed and after another two day's worth of trek the duo finally arrived to the see. The sun was shining, the temperature was a round and hot 90 degrees and not a single cloud was in sight.
"Tamer Uzumaki your battle with gym assistant Jerry is ready." An Ingenue called from just inside the doorway leading to the battle arena as Dawn wished him luck.