Soo… after the little trip I've written for Riley, Ben and Abi I wondered if you guys would read a sequel… I'm not entire sure…

Well. If I post it, you don't have to read the whole There and Back- Story, but it would be pretty helpful to read Riley's Past 1 and 2

It would explain more about Riley's past and would send Ben and Riley on a dangerous treasure hunt… (With guns =D)

Angst…

Just read the trailer… And let me hear what you think…

To write or not to write… that's the question…

I own nothing… = (

Voice (narrator)

Scenes and other things…

"Talking"

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TRAILER

Black screen, only Abi's crying voice over the dark:

"I will miss you two so much."

Slow-motion scene of a laughing Riley and a laughing Ben in the kitchen of the Gates-Chase mansion, without tone

Black

What to do, when your life changes because of a letter?

Riley staring on a letter, hardly breathing.

Black screen, only Riley's hurt voice:

"Ben, why would anybody write something like that?"

Pictures of a prison and a little police station

Black

What to do, when a devil of your past haunts you?

Silence, still Black

Quiet heartbeat

Than a shout of Ben, the heartbeat getting louder (still black screen):

"WE DON'T HAVE ANY TREASURE MAPS!"

Pictures of a bank, a small box and an old piece of paper. (New picture with each heartbeat)

Black

Heart beating continues to get louder and louder

What to do when the clues lead you out of your country?

Pictures of an airport, and a plane (New picture with each heartbeat)

Black

Increasing heartbeat and breathing.

What to do, when everything is going wrong?

Pictures of desert, a broken car and pyramids (New picture with each heartbeat)

Black

Fast heartbeat

What to do when the life of your best friend is in danger?

Different pictures of awful looking Ben and Riley, who are walking through the desert, Riley holding his cheek on one of them (New picture with each heartbeat)

Black

Riley's broken voice: (over the heartbeat)

"Ben, you shouldn't be here."

Still black an over the getting faster heartbeat an hectic breathing

A brief picture of Riley who stands in a dim light and looks very frightened with a heartbeat

Black and one heartbeat

A picture of Ben's face that is looking up, with one heartbeat

Black and one heartbeat

A picture of a gun, which is pointed at Ben, who is kneeling at the floor in the dim light with one heartbeat (the person who is holding the gun isn't seen)

Black and one heart beat

Than a voice of a man (heartbeat really loud)

"Okay…one (heart beat)… two (heart beat)… three (heart beat)"

The sound of a fired gun

Breathing and heartbeat stop.

Silence

Quiet crying

Silence

What would you do?

NATIONAL TREASURE- NEFERTITI'S TOMB

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A trailer like this wouldn't be produced… it's odd… but I wanted to try something… don't hate me =D

By the way… Abi is not so often in the story, I think

Review?