I am giving this story to my friend who I believe will do a better job finishing it than I can because apparently I am doing a "horrible" job with it.
I don't know what she will do though. She may re-write all the chapters or just give up on it as I have.
If you still want to continue with the story just go to my favorite authors and look up Shiloh It seems.
She'll be in charge of it from now on. As I said before, she may or may not re-write it, but I am in control of that no longer.
But if you like this kind of story please check out the other two stories on my profile: Hush Little Baby and Ring Around the Rosy.