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Dedications: To all who have been very patient. (My readers)

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Me: Anyways, hello everyone! Yes, I am updating. Wanna know why? Cuz I feel like it!

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Cat: And what?


Cat: But-

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Me: Ack! Okay, it seems we are getting nowhere. I'll just inform you guys on my story at the end.

Cat: Wha-



Tenten's POV.

I stayed there for a while, just thinking.

If you love me, let me know. If not, please gently let me go.

Did we rush things? Maybe. I mean, we didn't really spend any time together except school. A date or two there. And sometimes he would come to my house. Meh.

Wasn't this what I wanted all along? I don't know. Maybe a part of me wanted this. But the other part didn't. But there would've been a better solution or something. Gah. I hate not knowing things. Even though I act as if I know everything sometimes.

Pleasure of love lasts but a moment. Pain of love lasts a lifetime.

We're things already broken from the beginning? I guess my answer would be that things weren't perfect at the beginning but I have never seen the perfect couple. I have seen something close to perfect, but that's different. Wait, I didn't really answer my question. I just don't know anymore.

Who was at fault? Me. And partly Neji. For being an ass. Okay, but mostly me.

The ones that you love the most are usually the ones that hurt you the most.

Where did it go wrong? Okay, I know the answer to that one. Don't even have to say it.

When will my cell phone bill come? Whoops, wrong question. But seriously, I have been waiting decades for that bill! I already have the money saved up and everything! If it doesn't come soon, I'm spending that cash, I need a good trip to the mall anyways!

Okay, back to the main topic. Which is….Neji and I. Wait a second. I don't want to think about that anymore! So I'll stop! Muahahahahaha! Wait. What?

Okay, I might go mentally ill any second now.

"Hey there pretty lady, have some change for meh?" A hobo walked up to me. I looked up and frowned. Damn hobo. And his hoboness.

"No, now get the fuck lost! I am not in the fucking mood to be screwing around! So fucking leave me alone!" I stood up and stomped away. People just stared at me and at the hobo. What? I didn't have any change.

My angered face turned into a sad one. God, I wish today never happened. I looked down at my shoes. Speaking of my shoes, I really need to clean them.

"Oof!" I felt someone bump into my shoulder. I looked up and saw…


Bum. Bum. BUM!

Sorry. I told you guys I might get retarded soon.

"You!" I pointed at him. He raised an eyebrow.

"I need to talk to you. So follow me!" I grabbed his hand and led us to the park that was nearby.

I let go of his hand and glared at him. He just looked bored. Oh, don't worry Gaara, I'll entertain ya.

All of a sudden my anger and frustration disappeared. Right now I felt sadness and regret.

I fell down to the grass and started to cry. I wasn't even embarrassed anymore. I didn't care of what he thought of me. My mind was blank.

Hell's afloat in lover's tears.

I gasped when I felt a warm hand on my shoulder. But he didn't say anything.

I looked up and saw his emotionless face.

"I'm sorry. I was blaming you for all this. But this is my entire fault." I sniffed.

He just stayed there. I hugged him. I needed someone to hug. I barely know the guy, and yet I'm hugging him. I continued to sob, in his shirt.


Someplace else in the park.

"Dude, I'm tired, let's take a break." Kiba said sitting down in the grass. Naruto sat down next to him.

"Have you heard that Neji and Tenten broke up?" Naruto took a sip of his water bottle. Kiba almost spit out his water.

"No way! Seriously?!" He wiped his sweat on his shirt. (A/N: Ew. Sorry my cousins do that a lot. It's kinda gross.)

Naruto nodded and did the same as Kiba. (A/N: Once again. Ew. Sorry.)

"Whoa…weird." Kiba said dazed.

"Yeah, I know man. Neji told me." Naruto picked some grass and threw it at Kiba.

"What else did he tell ya?" Kiba threw some grass back and some landed in Naruto's mouth.

Naruto glared while Kiba laughed. "He said that she was with someone else. But he didn't tell me who."

"We need to find out whom." Kiba said. Naruto nodded and stood up.

"Let's go take a walk." Naruto started to walk and Kiba followed.

While the two chatted along, they just happened to notice Tenten and Gaara hugging.

"DUDE! LOOK OVER THERE!" Naruto pointed. Kiba gasped.

"That's Tenten! But wait, who's with her?" Naruto rolled his eyes.

"That's Gaara! The new kid!"

"Ooh. Dude! We need to go tell everybody!"

"Okay! Let's go!" Naruto and Kiba ran off and the two who were hugging didn't notice them.

(Back to Tenten's POV.)

I let go of Gaara and said goodbye. He insisted on taking me home in his car. I rejected the offer and took the bus ride home.

As I looked out the window, I thought of all the good times Neji and I shared.

I felt a tear roll down my cheek and I quickly wiped it away.

The pain of true love is the pain of being alive. It is a perpetual wound.

I got off the bus and walked to my house. Hinata greeted me and I just smiled.

"Something the matter Tenten?" Hinata walked closer to me.

"Uuh, no. Why?" I looked down.

"Your eyes are red and puffy." I could hear the worry sound in her voice.

"So you don't know?" I looked up at her with a biter smile.

"Eh?" It's better if I don't tell her.

"Never mind. I'm going to my room." I walked past her and started climbing up the stairs.

I gently closed my door and walked over to my closet. I stepped inside it and sat down and continued to cry.

Only the agony of parting do we look into the depths of love.

Hinatas POV.

I wonder what's wrong with Tenten…

My phone started to ring and I flipped it open.

"Moshi moshi?"

"HINATA-CHAAAAAN!" I winced at his loudness.

"Hello Naruto-kun."


"What Naruto-kun?"

"TENTEN-CHAN AND NEJI ARE OVER!" That's when I froze.



What? How did this happen?

"Naruto-kun, do you know why Tenten-chan and Neji-niisan are over?"



"Well what?" I rolled my eyes.

"Why did they break up?"


That is so unTenten-chan like. I wonder what happened.

"Oh. Okay. Well, I-I gotta go n-now Naruto-kun."



I shut my phone and frowned.

I am very confused.

I walked up the stairs and stopped at Tenten-chan's room debating whether or not to knock…

"Hinata, I know you're there." What? How did she know?


"Yeah, I heard the conversation between you and Naruto. I don't really want to talk about it."

Okay then. I guess she wants to be left alone. I understand that its difficult for her. But I also need to have a little chat with someone…

"Okay Tenten-chan."

With that, I went downstairs to fix us some dinner.

Tenten's POV.

I got out of the closet and read my Hello Kitty clock. (A/N: I love Hello Kitty. So yeah, beware of the random Hello Kitty items.)

"8:43." Might as well head to bed. That rhymed but I'm not in a great mood to be cheering about it.

I crawled into bed and coved my whole body with my blankets. Expect my face. Cause then I can't breathe.

I sighed and closed my eyes. But somehow, I couldn't sleep.

Take away love, and our life is a tomb.


Me: Yes I apologize for the short chapter, but I have a surprise!

Cat: Wha-

Me: Haven't you learned not to interrupt? Sheesh.

Cat: …

Me: Anyways, we are going to have a new person join us today!

Cat: …

Me: Please welcome…Mel!

Mel: Hi people!

Me: Hello Mel!

Mel: Hi Kim!

Cat: Hi Mel!

Mel: Hi Cat!

Cat: Hi Kim!

Me: Hi Cat!

Me:Anyways I'm not sure to end Lonely Eyes and do a sequel OR keep updating chapters for Lonely Eyes until the end. You guys choose.

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