Okay, first DON'T forget to VOTE!!! – I'm in this round!
Second someone said that I hadn't shown, or described their faces and I wanted to explain that. Edward wasn't going to explain his face, or look in a mirror because he thinks he's ugly, plus his fantasy would be where he looked like he was like everyone else. Compare how the Phantom hated his face to how Edward felt about the monster inside him-it was something that made him unworthy in his eyes. Bella's wasn't something that I was conscious of until that person asked; he looking in her eyes wasn't something that fit. To be honesty the reason for this came after: he could look at her eyes because he didn't want to see the beast he was. A monster whose guilt that would has force him to stop and take her back. He was trying to forget his demons and take want he wants.
Third I'm trying to get the Next Chapter of Bella's Dream up next week, no promises thou.