this's a poem I wrote bout a week ago. Wasnt really thinkin of BB and L, but i after reading it through I realised that it coudl fit them. So, i put the original version and the edited version. The only diference is that its in male rather than female form :) The peom was actually based on a picture i drew, I'd post it somewhere, but i cant so i wont lol XP anyway, this whole collection (if you will) will be all of my poems that i beleive are BB/L realted, k? reviews are always welcome!!!! :D

I do not own death note, but since DN isnt mentioned in the poems, i own them, k?!


(original version)

My bloody kisses.

your bleeding nose.

I drank in the wine leaving so fluently,

the liquid colour like that of a rose

gruesome and monstrously...

a light blush tints you face

as our lips make contact

the scarlet pillows and tongue invade

a knife hidden behind your back

my sister, my lover

my girlfriend, my bride

I see your eyes close in black

as the blade plunges inside

my bloody kisses

move down your neck

drawing pain and your breath

I am you

you are me

bloody kisses

life is missing

my tongue slithers

you die on the bed

bloody kisses

bloody kisses

bloody kisses are sisters

with those of death...

(edited version)

My bloody kisses.

your bleeding nose.

I drank in the wine leaving so fluently,

the liquid colour like that of a rose

gruesome and monstrously...

a light blush tints you face

as our lips make contact

the scarlet pillows and tongue invade

a knife hidden behind your back

my brother, my lover

my boyfriend, my bride

I see your eyes close in black

as the blade plunges inside

my bloody kisses

move down your neck

drawing pain and your breath

I am you

you are me

bloody kisses

life is missing

my tongue slithers

you die on the bed

bloody kisses

bloody kisses

bloody kisses are brothers

with those of death...