That was my first lemon in Bella point of view, did I get it right?
Okay so I got the typos- I know. (It was one of those times where you just want to update and don't have time to edit). And someone said there was a lack of continuity to answer that: I took the plot of one of The Nanny episodes and just put in a lemon with Bella and Edward instead of Maxwell and Fran and other characters from twilight. And no they both didn't just realize they were late- the daughter knew before hand, and the mom being a newlywed hadn't really thought about it until that moment.
So I wrote this as a one-shot, but do you think I should go on? It will take longer to update.
Oh, and I'm updating Bella's Dream tonight.