The Chaos User
Inner Thoughts, Dialogue, or reading passages from books and scrolls
(Quick Notes and Messages or Echoes.)
(Dark over lapping echoes)
''Boss Summons, Demons, Dark beings speaking, Demonic/Angry characters Speaking as well as extremely Dark spells and Magic.''
Team Maelstrom were making there way through the beach of Seaside hills. Numerous Eggman machines were on the beach ready to meet any resistance they would meet. Naruto charged in first throwing explosion note tagged kunai at the robots. With pinpoint accuracy the creatures were being blasted left and right. The machines that avoided the fate of their brothers charged forward but were met with the powerful fists of Chaos. Between being sliced or crush the metallic machines met the similar fate of destruction. Even if on the powerful side Chaos was never a speedy fighter on less in the water. That's where Tikal quick and rapid movements came in. While lacking the strength of Knuckles or Chaos the female echinda was quite quick. Even if her physical or chaos attacks weren't as powerful her concentration was top notch. She was capable of doing amazing acrobatics and could use chaos attacks with less energy then her fellow Chaos users.
''What does Chaos say Tikal?'' Naruto asked as he slammed his elbow into an eggman robot. Forming a Rasengan he shoved the spiraling sphere into the creature's core causing it to explode.
''He says the Emerald signature is moving further away. ''
''Damn...no time to waste.'' Placing his fingers in a cross Naruto formed a dozen Kagebunshin. ''Come on let's move it,'' Naruto said leading his team members passed the machines. They traveled up hill and came across a series of loops. ''Let's speed it up,'' He said as he focused on his wind nature. He shot forward with a burst of speed using the draft from the burst to pull his two team mates forward. Continuing across the palace like area they rode contraptions and were launched from ramps.
''Geez how the hell does Eggman afford to make all these elaborate areas? And how the hell does the Government not catch on? I mean really?'' Naruto asked as they trailed along the tracks.
''Who knows...but we have to stop the doctor all the same.'' Tikal said as they were launched from another ramp.
''Giant Turtles with platforms built on them?'' Naruto scowled as he and Tikal rolled into a sphere and crashed into a ground. Most of the momentum was shaken off upon impact thanks to the action. Chaos merely went splat onto the ground and began to reform. ''Seriously man how the hell do people not notice this? On the other hand it's not like we gave the general public away to personally contact us. ''
Chaos then pointed forward.
''Chaos said he's sensing two signatures now...but there going in...different directions?'' Tikal asked as the liquid incarnation of Chaos made a sound Naruto assumed was a confirmation.
''Huh...it could be Sonic or even Rouge. We should hurry up,'' Naruto said as he stepped upon another ramp and was launched into the air. Landing on the next section they were being charged by round Eggman robots carrying lances.
''Chaos launch me forward!'' Naruto shouted as the liquid creature clutched Naruto then threw him forward. After the Ark incident Naruto had training harder then ever before. His focus of training was to master Chaos related abilities and even going far as trying to mimic some of attacks he witnessed Sonic and Shadow do. While the blond couldn't do a triple spin he was quite proficient at mimicking the spin dash and somewhat got the spin attack down. After all the attacks were reminiscent of some of the Akimichi clan techniques so Naruto was quite familiar with them. After bowling over the enemies the trio hopped on another one of those strange vehicle devices.
Soon enough the group came to a beach like section separated by water. They continued on ahead as they caught sight of the Doctor's newest toy. It was a red ship, shaped like a hawk. It had machine gun ports were fashioned into, peculiar, renditions of hawks' talons. As Naruto focused his vision he saw three people fighting.
''Kuso! Let's go!'' He said as they charged forward. Naruto was both shocked and amazed that young Cream could hold not only Amy, but a creature of Big's weight. The doctor fired his weapon, his machine gun and support gun firing rapid rounds. When the rapid fire rounds ceased Amy and Big were dropped to take advantage of this. The machine size proved a hindrance as it couldn't maneuver effectively and the guns at the side couldn't hit targets that were too close.
''Hey Egghead!'' Naruto shouted out as he brought a Rasengan down where the power supply would be.
''Naruto/Naruto-san!'' Cream and Amy cried out in surprise.
Metal was quite surprised that Naruto showed up here and now. It seemed baiting the blond's attention wouldn't be as easy as he thought. Even the mere annoyance of Amy Rose and her two friends who should have been no problem for the Metal Doppelganger had surprised the machine. Even the Doctor's up to date files seemed to be lacking. His scanners then picked up signatures for Team Sonic and some other trio. Whoever the latter was they were not part of the plan. The fact that they registered on the radar meant they were able to destroy some of the robots.
Assigned robots he had set up in this area wouldn't be enough to hold Sonic's Team along with Shadow's team once they showed up. Metal was a-jarred from his calculations as both teams continued to attack the machine. Metal tried to even go as far as using the Rotary attack and fighting in reverse. Between Naruto's jutsu attacks shredding the gears and Chaos's attack overloading the circuit the rotors. The machine was now stationary.
Chaos again swiped at where Naruto stroke with his Rasengan earlier and destroyed the covering. Amy and Cream had climbed onto Big's shoulder. Both of them had curled up in a sonic like ball and were launched from Big's fishing rod like a baseball. Amy pulling out her Piko Piko hammer slammed into the exposed power source. Tremors echoed throughout the machine. As Amy was bounded back from the force she caught Cream's hand as they shot over the machine.
With no choice Metal had to retreat. The Egg Hawk was far too damage for further combat. The only thing to do was to eject the machine and they with him the recordings of the battle.
A second later, the Egg Mobile, central nervous system to most Eggman machines, ejected itself and rocketed into the sky above.
''What are you three doing here?'' Naruto asked, the question on his mind the moment they saw him. Apparently the three were trying to track down Sonic/Chochola/Froggy.
In return Naruto explained what his team was doing and how they found themselves there. Saying there goodbyes the two groups split up as they continued their respective journeys.
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