This story is going to be deleted. Soon. I'm sorry for everyone that really liked this story, and everyone that wanted to see it end. But let's face it, it really is terribly written, has a poor plot, no subplot to speak of, and awful dialogue. I've just lost faith in it turning into something decent.
Unless you can think of a very good argument (like you should be running for president argument). I'll continue to write (always) I just won't be as active in the Twilight universe as I have once been. I may post a few things here and there, just don't be waiting for it.
A spoiler for the end is at the bottom.
Also, if you want to know how it ends, the Volturi capture Sophie, Seth rescues her, and then The End.
I'll be deleting this soon. See you, possibly.