Yes, I know, this is the author's note no reader wants to see. So, ripping the bandaid off quickly - I'm deleting this story in two days.
I went back and read the first chapters and realized that they are really, really bad. I will be rewriting this story. And it will be up soon, I promise. I already have most of the first chapter done. Sorry for leading you guys on for so long, your reviews really encouraged me to keep writing. It's just that my inability to write well sort of got in the way of that. The later chapters are not nearly as poor, and so you may be seeing those in the future.
Thank you for supporting me.