Okay, so, I'm really, really not happy with how this story is going. I turned Andraste into a typical Mary-Sue, my writing sucks in this story, and I don't think my story is realistic at all.
THUS, I'm going to re-write the entire story. Granted, it might be a few weeks, but I will rewrite it, after I publish a few more chapters of Vanished, It All Started With Duck Pajamas, and my new story, How to Burn. I'm sorry for the inconvenience, but this story has been driving me crazy for quite sometime, and I would like to give my loyal readers better than what I've dished out in this catastrophe I call a story.