Okay, I'm rewriting this story.
I feel like I'm just dancing around with Tara's real thoughts, and I can't get any grip on the actual story. I just don't like this story, the way it came out, the way it's going. Tara is just not a character I can write.
The first chapter of the rewrite will be up about... now. Check out my profile if you think this story would have had potential if I hadn't messed up so badly. It's called Two If By Sea.