Thanks to all of my readers who commented and encouraged me in the writing of L'etre et L'ame.
I've just completed a brief revision of the final chapter. During the initial writing, I rushed the final chapters because of my desire to move on to some RL work. However, the abrupt ending bothered me, and it's niggled at me for the past two months. Hoping for some relief, I've gone back into the story and included a scene that I hopes smoothes out the conclusion somewhat.
None of it's Pulitzer stuff (grin) but it's an improvement.
So, if you'd like to see some better Edward/Bella resolution, it's at your fingertips, just click on Chapter 12.