A/N: Hey everyone, this is Edward-4-Life00. This is my first fanfic, so PLEASE review and tell me what you like, what you don't, what I should change, EVERYTHING. Also, I am looking for a beta. I know right now in my story I have alot of mistakes because I have no one to check in advance to everyone who reads and especially everyone who likes my story.
"Jacob, why did we ever leave?" Jacob and I were sitting on a plane on our way home.
Jacob sighed "Nessie, you have asked me this too many times. We left, because we had to go back to reality. If we completely disappeared of the face of the earth, don't you think someone would have come to get us?"
"Yes, but we still could have stayed a little longer." I was so frustrated that Jacob wouldn't just give in and let us stay on our honeymoon just a little longer.
Jacob just shook his head. We had been arguing since the day we packed up our stuff to leave.
"Alright alright. I give up. Let's just get home. I miss everyone."
"I knew you would give it up. You always do."
"I don't always give up."
"Ness, yeah you do."
"OK let's stop fighting. I love you." I leaned over and kissed him on the cheek.
"Ness, you know I love you too." He leaned over and kissed me full on the lips. I was getting into it, when the man next to us cleared his throat. I looked up and gave him an apologetic smile. He smiled back and gave a knowing look. Jake heard too and got the hint.
"My stomach hurts. Do you think you could get me some pepto bismo? "
"Yeah give me a second."
The next stewardess that passed by, Jake asked for my medication. She came back with it in a minute.
"Thank you so much for this." I said. My stomach had started bothering me. The medication completely knocked me out.
The next thing I knew, Jake was whispering in my ear for me to wake up. I mumbled a few incoherent words before he just picked me up, threw me over his shoulder, and carried me off the plane.
I was just on the verge of unconsciousness, when a high pitched squeal pulled me back. I open my eyes only to see Aunt Alice jumping up and down.
"Aunt Alice…" I mumbled.
"Nessie, come on get up. Your family wants to see you." Jake whispered in my ear. I knew he was right.
"Put me down Jake." The second I was on my feet, I was swarmed by my family. I was hugged and pulled everywhere. I was asked so many questions, that if I wasn't half vampire, I probably wouldn't have been able to understand them all.
After I had answered all their questions, I decided to ride home with my mom and dad with Jake in the back with me. I leaned against Jakes shoulder. I was so happy nothing could change it.
A/N: I know it is a short chapter, but I didn't want to give it all away right away. I promise they will get longer. So, question time,
1. Do you like my story so far?
2. If you do why? If you don't why?
3. Do you think I should use other people besides Renesemee's POV?
4. If so who's?
5. Do you think this should be only about Jacob and Renesemee, or others (like Edward and Bella) as well?
PLEASE review and I will give you cookies!!