To all who are still interested in this story, I have re-written every chapter and added a new one over on AO3. I may eventually repost here, but unfortunately, I find the upload process to be an extreme pain.
Here the story is about 97K, and the re-write on AO3 is currently 113,000. I have changed some plot points, but nothing crazy. I've also re-written the mature content.
So, it's been almost 12 years but I am back to fulfill my promise of finishing this story. Sorry for the long wait, I know abandoned stories are the worst! I have the rest of the plot outlined and will be updating with new chapters over at AO3 every ten days or so.