Chapter 1: Prologue
Queendom of Falena
337 Solar Year (125 Falenan New Capital Calendar Year)
Lazlo En Kuldes: Bearer of the Rune of Punishment (aka. Rune of Atonement and Forgiveness), which is 1 of the 27 True Runes. He was living a secluded and tranquil life until he was secretly asked by Chairwoman Flare to join and protect two other diplomats being sent to establish formal trade ties with the Queendom of Falena, because it appears that dark and clandestine forces are working against such an alliance. He is 49 years old.
Olinda Falenas: Younger daughter of Elemark Falenas. Considered by many to be the most beautiful princess in the history of the Queendom. However, she is as curious as she is lovely. In fact, her love of trying new experiences without always thinking them through has gotten her in trouble on more than one occasion. She is 18 years old.
Cyrah Falenas: Older daughter of Elemark Falenas. Attractive, stubborn, and resilient, she always knows how to get what she wants from others. She is the first Falenan princess to be married to the up and coming prominent Godwin family. She is 20 years old.
Elemark Falenas: Queen of Falena. She is renowned for her beauty and wisdom. During her reign Falena had experienced a time of relative peace and stability until a recent war with the neighboring nation of Nagarea. Thanks to her clever workings, a temporary peace agreement has been made. And the lives of her people are starting to return to normal. She is 37 years old.
Alen Aethelbald: Commander of the Queen's Knights. He is famous for both his sword and pen, and is considered by most to be the quintessential warrior poet. He stands by his Queen's side with his years of experience both on the field of battle and on the field of politics. He is 50 years old.
Marcus Godwin: Winner of Princess Cyrah's Sacred Games and the next Commander of the Queen's Knights. His ability with a sword has been questioned by many, but his cunningness and magical prowess is considered unparalleled in the Queendom. He is 33 years old.
Rose: The youngest Queen's Knight and Olinda's personal bodyguard. She and Olinda are closer than sisters. As such, she is highly protective and fiercely loyal to the princess. She is beautiful, but very dangerous. With her fiery red hair and deadly nunchuck skills, she is a force to be reckoned with. She is 19 years old.
Robert: Queen's Knight and older brother of Graess. He is brash, confident, and quite stern. His speed and accuracy with a halberd coupled with his fierce attitude has earned him the nickname Robert the Reaper. He has the ability to finish off a foe so quickly; seemingly in one touch, like death. He is 31 years old.
Graess: Queen's Knight and younger brother of Robert. Formerly, the bodyguard of Cyrah until Marcus won the Sacred Games. His thoroughness and thoughtfulness on and off the battlefield are feared and respected by all. Always cautious and alert, he studies his opponent carefully before making a final move against them. He is 27 years old.
Tanya: One of the diplomats sent by the Island Nations Federation's Obel Maritime Council and Flare En Kuldes to establish formal trade ties with Falena. Tanya was chosen to help broker this formal alliance because of her in depth historical knowledge of other cultures as well as her keen tactical wit, which she has honed over the years. Also, she travels with a bookworm-type assistant named Daniel. She is 47 years old.
Desmond: One of the diplomats sent by the Island Nations Federation's Obel Maritime Council and Flare En Kuldes to establish formal trade ties with Falena. Having served for years under Lino, Flare, and many other political members of the Federation. Few have gained as much political savvy and insight as this aging statesman. Though recently retired, he is trusted by all sides within the Federation. Thus, he has agreed to this one last mission at Flare's request. He is 60 years old.
Nyoka: One of the Four Grand High Priest that rule over the Order of Tessares, which is the supreme governing body in the Nagarea Theocracy. This high priest, also, acts as the ambassador between the two nations when he periodically travels to the Queendom in order to inspect the military operations and weapon levels, per the tenuous peace treaty signed at the end of the last war. He is very quiet and mysterious. Also, he speaks in a very strange and old fashion way. He appears to be 45 years old.
Razi: The personal attendant and apprentice to Ambassador Nyoka. He is gifted with a very athletic physique and a strong magical aptitude. As such, this young man quickly traveled up the ranks of his Order. He completed a decade's worth of sword and magical training in less than a year's time. Because of his ability to learn new combat skills so effortlessly, he has become quite egotistical and pretentious. However, being the youngest person ever to join the Order of Tessares, he quickly caught Nyoka's attention, who brought the young man into his service. Razi is 22 years old.
Note to Readers:
As of March 2017, this entire story has been completely updated as a second edition. Many typos, grammatical errors, and plot holes have been corrected. While nothing dramatically new has been added. Previous readers may notice certain subtle changes to the story.
Most importantly of all! This fanfiction is now available in a kind of audiobook format. You can find the entire story read aloud on Youtube. Simply go to the website and type in: "Punishment of the Sun."
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