Here is the redone version of chapter one, also I apologize to all my reads for the horrible spelling and grammar mistakes of the fist version.
Disclaimer-I don't own Harry Potter or Death Note. Nox Academy though is mine along with Warp, Lunar, Eclipse, Shade and Mech
Marcus stood at the door of #4 Pivot Drive glancing down at the sheet of paper in his hand. Double cheeking that he was in the right place he took a deep breath, braced himself and raised his hand to knock on the door.
Marcus was the founder and headmaster of Nox (1) Academy, a school for people who had great potential in certain areas. Those people were brought to Nox and taught to develop their talents and skills. He himself had an inhuman skill and while his students didn't, they had their own skills that he helped them learn. Nox Academy was in England but its students came from all over the world. Nox had opened years ago but only accepted a couple of students each year and right now Warp was searching for students with potential. It was this search that had led him to the door of #4 Pivot Drive.
Marcus glanced up as the door in front of him opened revealing a rather wide man with little neck.
"What do you want?" The man asked.
"Are you Vernon Dursley? My name is Marcus. I'm here to speak to you about your nephew." Marcus explained
"What about him?" Vernon questioned.
"A test was administrated to the elementary schools last week searching for children with large amounts of talent in certain areas. Your nephew caught our eye and we would like him to attend our boarding school that I run called Nox Academy." Marcus replied steadily.
"Would I have to see the boy again?" Vernon demanded.
"Not if you sign a release form making him a ward of the school." Marcus replied causing Vernon to grunt
"Boy! Get your stuff and come here!" Vernon bellowed into the house before turning back to face Marcus.
"You can have the little freak, we don't want him, just make sure never to bring him back here." Marcus was unaffected by this, having already had to deal with Arend (2) cruel parents already. After waiting patiently for a little over a minute and scrawny, black haired boy with wide green eyes appeared at the door way.
"Y-y-yes U-uncle Vernon?" the boy asked hesitantly
"You're leaving here Boy; you're are leaving with that man and never coming back, because if you do we will get rid of you for good. Do you understand Boy?" Vernon questioned. The boy just stared at his uncle in shock.
"Reply you ungrateful freak!" Vernon yelled slapping the boy.
"Y-y-yes U-u-uncle V-Vernon." He replied shakily once more and grabbed his bag before exiting the house and standing next to Marcus. With a snort Vernon closed the door with a bang leaving the two standing on the door step.
"Come on kid; let's get going, no point standing around here." Marcus stated grabbing Harry's bags in one hand and gently led the stiff boy to the car with the other.
"S-s-sir, umm, where are we going?" Harry asked carefully.
"Hmm? To the school I run, Nox Academy. You remember that test that the teacher had you do last week? That test was to find you and kids like you that could someday turn out to do great things. You will be living there with other kids, though they may not be your age, I'm sure you'll get along well enough." Marcus explained gently.
"A-a-a school? R-really?" Harry asked in awe.
"Yep, there you can start over, leave anything you want behind you. All the students pick a name to go by at Nox other than their real name." Marcus replied.
"Do I get to pick a different name mister?" Harry asked a little braver.
"You sure can, in fact you can pick it now if you want, or you can wait until later and have some time to think about it. OH, and call me Marcus, mister makes me feel old. Despite that I'm well over a hundred already." Marcus told Harry as they got into the car and he started driving. "Really?" Harry asked. "Yep, and in around half an hour we'll be at Nox and I can introduce you to the other students, though there are only four others besides yourself right now." said Marcus.
"Hmm, Jade, Bob, Jadyn, Jinx, Mage, Mage. My name will be Mage." Harry now Mage stated.
"Mage huh, it suits you. Ok then Mage it will be." Marcus smiled and ruffles Mage's hair before turning on the radio to a music station and Me Against the World started playing. Mage smiled slightly before he started humming along with the song. Once the song was over, Mage glanced at Marcus to see him smiling.
"Your enjoy music?" Warp asked and smiled when Mage nodded in reply
"We'll see about adding it to the list of things you'll be learning" Mage told him.
"What else will I be learning?" mage questioned
"Hmm, let's see, martial arts, stratagem, music, dance, French, and due to your aptitude, that's what your good at, leadership, motivation, psychology. You will also be getting your basic education alongside that." Warp told him. Mage's eyes went wide at the concept of learning so much. He couldn't wait.
The rest of the trip past in silence except for the music playing on the radio, sometimes Mage would hum along to a song that he liked. After half an hour of driving, Marcus pulled up to a large, castle like building 15 minutes from Winchester.
"Welcome to Nox Academy Mage, your new home." Warp said, breaking the comfortable silence.
"This is Nox?" Mage asked in awe.
"Yep, come on, I'll introduce you to everyone and show you around." Warp said putting one hand on Mage's shoulder and leading him inside his new home and towards his new life at Nox Academy.
2-Afrikaans for eagle
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