This is my first poem in my series of poems. I wrote this for my grandfather who just recently died. May he RIP. My second poem is also for him.

A New Day

Though my soul is sad,

I cannot bear the pain,

I know that you are with me,

Even though your body's slain

You told me not to cry,

I'm sorry I can't follow

But I promise I will try,

Not to cry tomorrow

I'm glad I got to know you,

To hear what you had to say,

You told me to remember,

Tomorrow's a new day

How was it? Good, bad, horrible, emo-ish? Please review.