Because, on honest reflection, Fanservice II was better written, and it seemed as if something needed to be done. Especially as at least one reviewer commented that he'd enjoyed Fanservice II, but almost not read it after not much caring for Fanservice.
As FFN won't tag it as updated, despite the "default chapter" being replaced, I'm uploading this note as "chapter two."
Thanks for reading, and I'd love to hear from you. Especially if you read the earlier version and have an opinion regarding the changes.
27 August 2003