OK, Gailbananafan here, I continued this story from Emmett is a huggable bear-123 and the following author note is hers:
Okay. This is my first fanfic so PLEASE be nice. Read and review. I want 5 reviews so i can post the 2nd chapter! I REALLY hope you like it!
Disclaimer: I own none of these characters, some I made up though. Stephanie Meyer owns the rest!
"Renesmee!" I searched around frantically. "Renesmee! Where are you?" I hurried around the corner and someone holding something. A vampire holding something. I snuck up on him to see what he was holding. My face went paler and I didn't even think that was possible.
He was drinking out of Renesmee.
I tried to grab him and pull him away, but my hand went right through him. I kept trying to grab him but it never worked.
The vampire whipped his head around, staring at me with evil, bloodthirsty, crimson eyes. I tried to not look at Renesmee, but I failed. I stared at her lifeless body with two, little puncture wounds on her neck. Her eyes were staring off into to space. They looked blank.
A rage so powerful filled me. I wanted to rip him to shreds and burn him over and over and over. And over. If that was possible. The vampire had blond hair. He lunged at me. I tried to move out of the way but he was faster than me. He grabbed my arm and bit into it.
I let out a scream. The blond vampire looked up at me.
"Bella?" He said. He sounded worried. I just stared at him, wondering how he knew my name.
"Bella?" He was getting more worried.
"How do you know me?" I asked, my voice barely a whisper.
"Bella!" I heard other murmurs. I glanced around to see if there were any more vampires. There weren't. I looked back at the unknown vampire.
" I'm going to get your daughter and kill her, and then I'm coming for you." He told me in a different voice. Before I could threaten him, he disappeared. Everything went black and then I was in Edward's arms.
"Bella!" He was relieved. Everyone was around us, except for Jake...and Renesmee.
"Where's Nessie?" I asked him.
He looked confused. " Still at the house with Jake. Bella, what-" I jumped up and booked it to the house before he could finish. Edward was following me.
I burst into the house.
"Jake? Nessie?" I called. I was turning the corner into the living room and Jake ran into me, scaring the crap outta me.
"Shhhh. She fell asleep." He walked back into the living room. I peered around the corner and saw Renesmee sleeping on the couch. She is really eight years old, but she looks fifteen. I let out a sigh of relief.
Edward jogged into the door.
"Why did you scream?" He asked me.
"Because this vampire...well I think I blacked out. It's nothing Edward. I guess it's a bad blackout." I put on the most convincing smile I could. Edward bought it.
"Okay. I was really scared, Bella." He embraced me in a hug.
"Really? Edward? Scared?" I teased. He chuckled. We walked into the living room and sat on the love seat. Renesmee stirred then woke up.
"Jake?" She asked feeling around the couch with her eyes closed.
"I'm right here Ness." Jake smiled at her. I could see love in his eyes. Jake loved Renesmee. I'm gonna have to talk to him about that later. I walked over to Renesmee and brushed her hair out of her face. " Hey sleepy head."
" Hi mom. You don't have to mess with my hair. I'm not a child." She told me.
"Technically you are a child, Renesmee. Your eight."
" I look fifteen. What are people going to think when we go out?"
" Yes. What are they going to think? A 'twenty-seven' year old walking around with a fifteen year old. People think I would have had you when I was seven."
She sighed. "You won this round mom." Everyone laughed. "I'm thirsty. Jake, let's go hunting." Jake smiled and nodded and then walked outside. Renesmee followed.
When Edward stopped staring at me, I checked my arm where that vampire bit me. I don't know why I checked.
Where the vampire bit me, there were two little puncture wounds, in the exact spot where the he bit me.