Almost a Musical Number

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I changed a grammatical error from the fourth sentence. I also changed words in the last two sentences while blending them together.


Layla left the Stronghold home with a little smile, spun around once and hugged herself.

She almost couldn't believe what had happened.

Her emotion was strong enough to affect nearby vegetation. The grass blades rocked sideways, the flowers opened and closed, the bark grew faster, moss spread everywhere and fungi followed suit. Even weeds reacted, weaving themselves into braids.

She walked home, the plants celebrating with her the whole way.

Will was just too good of a friend. He was so very wonderful, convincing his parents disguised as realtors to have landscapers only plant native flora for the new homes.