Finally! I got to update!!!
Sorry for a LONG time on updating this one... Haha, even I'm not too busy today, I'm just not in a mood to update my stories...
So, this is the final chapter of LOC...
I hope you guys will like this... And thank you very much to all who had supported this fic... This is my first fanfic that had reached to 50+ reviews... Thanks guys ^_^
Anyways, here's LOC 20... Enjoy ^_^
ZOE: Come on, Heart... Who's that secret girl?
ME: That's why I can't tell you because it's a secret... And besides, you will know the secret tomorrow
ZOE: But I want to know her now!
ME: Hehe... Suit yourself (Walks away)
JESS: Oh, Kouichi... You're really good...
KOUICHI: Yeah... I'm better than my emo brother...
(On the other corner)
TAKUYA: (Playing my PSP... Hey! He didn't ask me first! Argh!)
ME: Yo Takuya... H- Is that my PSP?!
TAKUYA: Huh? Oh uh... (Hide PSP at back) what PSP?
ME: The PSP on your back
TAKUYA: What PSP on my back? (Hides under his shirt)
ME: Now under your shirt...
TAKUYA: There's no PSP on my shirt (Going to hide in his pants but-)
ME: Hoy, huwag... Sa'yo na muna yan! I mean, you can have it for now... Just don't hide it under your pants or I'll kill you
TAKUYA: Sure... (Continues on playing)
ME: Say, what happen to the two lovebirds?
TAKUYA: Who? Me and Zoe?
ME: (Hit him on the back neck) No, you idiot... You know, the two that had doing the 'you know what' for 3 straight hours on that door (Shows 'that door' with a creepy music)
TAKUYA: Ow... Them... I think they're finish... I think
ME: I suppose they are now... I'll ask them...
TAKUYA: Ok but just don't open it... It'll give you nosebleed
ME: Right... *knock knock* Jess? Kouichi? Are you dead- I mean alive- I mean fine?
JESS: Yeah we're alive and fine
KOUICHI: But we're not dead!
ME: O-k... So, are you FINISH from WHAT you two are DOING in 3 hours?!!!
KOUICHI: Yup... I guess so?
ME: Good... Just clean up the MESS you make there
TAKUYA: You mean the-
ME: Don't say it
TAKUYA: I'm just trying to say-
ME: I said don't say it!
TAKUYA: BED!!! HAHAHAHAHA!!! (Run away)
ME: Oh, I thought you're going to say-
JESS & KOUICHI: DON'T SAY IT!!!
ME: Oops! ^_^
TOMMY: I'm bored...
GERARD: (Making sounds like crying)
TOMMY: Gerard, what's wrong?
TOMMY: You miss your mommy?
TOMMY: Don't worry Gerard, we will find you mother soon as possible...
GERARD: Arf! (It means thank you... XDXD)
JP: That crazy dog... Yuck... I still feel saliva on my face... (Not noticing that he's heading for the stairs) I hate pets... especially that li- AHHH!! (Falls from stairs) Ow! AH! Ow! AH! Ow! AH! *THUG!!!!* Owww...
ME: See? Now you experience to be fallen from stairs... Jumbo... Hey! A new nickname ^_^
JP: (Tries to get up but he's too heavy so he stays lying on the floor) ARGH! Curse you stairs!
ZOE: Sora! Hi!
SORA: ZOE! *hugs Zoe*
ZOE: Glad you stay here...
SORA: Thanks... And I feel home already, thanks to Kouji...
ZOE: Oh, I see (Evil glares at Kouji)
SORA: Anyways, I'm just staying here for 3 days
ZOE: It's ok... Just enjoy yourself staying here...
SORA: I'm really happy that you're here...
ZOE: Yeah... (Glares at Kouji again)
KOUJI: (Mind: Stop glaring at me!)
The Next Day...
ZOE: Can you tell me now?
ME: Ok, ok... sheez...
ZOE: Oh thank you thank you thank you!
ME: And here she is! (Opens door) Zoe... Meet, Haley... umm... what's your last name?
ME: Right... Meet Haley Walker... Zoe, Haley... Haley, Zoe...
HALEY: Ni ^_^
ZOE: Nice to meet you
HALEY: So Heart, why did you call me?
ME: Oh, there's something you need to do
HALEY: Spill it out
ME: Would you make Kouji as your boyfriend?
HALEY: What?! Why?!
ME: Well, let me explain...
20 minutes later...
ME: So that's why we need you to... you know, just distract Kouji away from Sora until she'll travel home...
HALEY: But why I'm the one who'll distract him?
ME: I don't know, it just pop out in my mind that you're the right girl for him
HALEY: Well, I suppose I can do it... He's cute anyway
HALEY: What? What's so funny?
ME: N-oth-in-g (Rolling on floor laughing)
HALEY: What just happen?
ZOE: Uh, she got some tantrums...
TAKUYA: Hey Kouichi!
KOUICHI: Yo, what's up?
TAKUYA: Umm... Let me say that if you will do the 'thing' that you and Jess do again, remember to put a 'do not disturb' sign in the door
KOUICHI: Uhh, why?
TAKUYA: Coz, when the others or I sometimes will go to your room, we are getting nosebleed on your... Uhh... just put a 'do not disturb' sign (walks away)
KOUICHI: Ok, but I will also put a 'knock first, before enter' sign...
ME, ZOE & HALEY: (Head pop out on the curtains)
ME: There they are...
(Kouji is away form Sora)
HALEY: Guys, are you sure from this... I mean there's no sign that he's making a move with her
ME: That's what he wants you to think
ZOE: Uh, Heart, I think she's right
ME: Nonsense, you'd never seen that he'd almost kiss her when Matt call on the phone... uh oh (MIND: I forgot to tell Zoe that)...
ME: Don't worry, it didn't collide, only inches away... Just don't be loud...
ZOE: Haley, do your job...
HALEY: Ok, but I don't want to it when she's around... or even you two...
ZOE: Ok, I'll get Sora
ME: And I'll be here, watching you...
HALEY: No, you're going with Zoe...
ME: But I want t-
HALEY: NO BUT'S YOUNG LADY!!!
ME: Wow, now who's the bossy now...
ME: Ok, ok... (MIND: There's something strange around here)
ZOE: Wow, you really scare her
HALEY: Yeah, I'm a good actress ^_^
ZOE: I'm gonna call her...
KOUJI: So, how did you know Matt?
SORA: Well, h-
ZOE: Sora, can you help me from here, please...
SORA: Be right back...
HALEY: (Still hiding in the curtains) Good work, Zoe... Now's my chance...
KOUJI: (Randomly whistling)
HALEY: Hi Kouji...
KOUJI: Oh, hi Haley... HALEY?! What're you doing here?
HALEY: Aww, do you want me to go home now? *Puppy eyes*
KOUJI: No, no... That's not what I meant... I mean that I've didn't seen you since the last day I saw you
HALEY: Oh, so? Did you miss me?
KOUJI: I-I... sure, I miss you
HALEY: Aww, I miss you too (Hugs Kouji)
On my side...
ME: (Sipping smoothie) Tommy's right, surveillance camera is a great idea
(Watching Kouji and Haley on the surveillance camera room)
ME: Aww, that's cute... Well, Haley really is a good actress
Back to the two...
HALEY: (Still hugging Kouji)
KOUJI: Uh, you can let go now...
HALEY: (Let go Kouji)
KOUJI: So, what brings you here?
HALEY: oh, well... I just wanted to say that
KOUJI: Uhh, what?
HALEY: That I love you (Quickly kisses Kouji)
ME: (Spit smoothie) whoa... that was quick... good job Haley...
ZOE: (Suddenly appeared) OMG!
SORA: (Also appeared along with Zoe) Uhh? What's going on?
HALEY: (Breaks the kiss) Oh, hi... You must be Sora
SORA: Yeah... How'd you know?
HALEY: Well, Kouji tells me
SORA: I see
HALEY: Oh, by the way, I'm Haley... Kouji's girlfriend
KOUJI: What the?!
ZOE: (MIND: You go girl)
SORA: So, you're Kouji's girlfriend, right?
SORA: (Looks at Kouji) Kouji I didn't know you have a girlfriend...
KOUJI: It's not l- I didn't- I can explain
ZOE: Well, well, well Kouji... Looks like you got your own lover now
ME: I need to see this personal! (Goes to door) The door's lock! I can't open it!!! It's lock from outside...
(A chair was locking the door from outside)
SORA: Ok then... This is awkward but I'm cool... Come on Zoe, let's get some smoothie... (Walks away)
ZOE: Right behind you... See you two lovebirds
ME: Help me!!!
TOMMY: Well, Gerard... Here we are... The place where Heart and I find you...
TOMMY: Don't worry Gerard, you find your mother...
???: Woof WOOF!
TOMMY: I think we find her...
GERARD'S MOTHER: My son!
TOMMY: Wh- she talks?!
TOMMY: Hey, wait a minute? Gerard? You talk to?!
(And there's the scene were a mommy dog and his son hugging each other... awww ^_^)
TOMMY: So, this is weird... now dogs can talk...
GERARD: Yeah, sorry if I didn't speak for a long time when I'm with you
TOMMY: Nah, its ok...
GERARD'S MOTHER: Thank you so much for taking good care of my child
TOMMY: it was no big deal
GERARD: Looks like it's time to say goodbye
TOMMY: Yeah, I will miss you so much... *sniff* I promise not to cry- I (Starts to cry) I'LL MISS YOU!!! WAHH!!!
GERARD: I miss you too...
TOMMY: Can you bite me one last time
GERARD: (Bites Tommy's hand)
TOMMY: Oww... Goodbye buddy
GERARD: Bye Tommy
TOMMY: Hope I see you soon
(Scene where Gerard and his mother fade away)
TOMMY: *sniff* back to business...
ME: Uh, guys? Can somebody please open the door... Hello? Anyone?
WOOHOO!!! It is done...
I think this is the longest one yet...
Thank you for those who had reviewed this fanfic... (You know who you are) And for those who will review this final chap... You get a smoothie!!!
Haley is one of my OC in my songfic 'The Way I Loved You'... If you hadn't read it, please read it... also review...
Speaking of songfic, here's the result of my poll in 'what songfic do you want?':
Your Guardian Angel: 4 votes
Today Was a Fairytale: 2 votes
Untitled: 2 votes
When I'm With You: 1 vote
I'll Never Get Over You Getting Over Me: 0 vote T_T
There's the result... thank you also for the votes... But you still can vote until... Friday I guess...
LOC is officially over!!! But don't worry guys; there will be a sequel... It'll be more random, funnier and more fun... The problem is I still can't think of a title... if you can think a great title, you can put it on your review or PM me... I'm gonna wait for your suggestion...
I'm gonna start updating Solemnity (when my computer is fixed... I'm just using the other computer) and when the poll is done, I'm also gonna start on the new songfic (whatever the results is)...
So... STAY TUNED