All Right everybody I know I have not updated in a while because most of my stories seemed a bit to rushed and all but the is a revised copy of Smoke Ninja. This story will be longer than its predecessor and hopefully with a lot more detail.
Rocks and kunai knives were being flung at a little defenseless boy with blond spiky hair and a God awful orange jumpsuit. Most normal people would try to stop the projectiles from reaching the little eight year old kid but there were not any normal people around only people driven by anger and loss from the hands of the mighty kyuubi demon or also known as the nine tailed fox the guardian of all things fire. The mob of people seemed to be growing in number as the screams of pain from the legacy of the Forth Hokage. The poor kid looked like a mangled corpse when the mob left him. Each one silently prayed in their stone cold hearts that the demon brat would die from blood loss and that it would be a slow and agonizing death.
The pain was unbearable, this had been the worst beating as of yet little Naruto did the one thing he could do and that was pass out in a pool of his own blood there on the side of the street. Naruto hoped that his time had finally come so he could escape the misery that was the Hidden Leaf village. Little did any one know that this day a monumentous event would take place. Kami and the three sisters of fate looked down on Naruto with pity for here was there chosen hero who was supposed to deliver the world from the very darkness that was created. With a wave of his hand, Kami made sure that Naruto didn't die just yet but met his guest. Naruto woke up with a start in ankle deep water and it was pure black. The only thing he could see were immense pipes going in all sorts of directions but what intrigued him the most was the most sinister of laughs. He seemed to want to follow the laughter because in his gut (no pun intended) he would find some answers. All of a sudden ,Naruto stopped dead in his tracks when he found a large cage. A pair of great ruby red eyes and a sinister smile persed the darkness and Naruto jumped back in fright. He asked the great beast in sudden firght almost fearing the answer. "Wh-what are you?" he asked. The creature that was a giant red fox started laughing.
"Hahaha foolish human don't you recognize me? Take a closer look come close to the cage if you dare."
Naruto timidly looked at the giant monster before him only to see the same pair of crimson eyes, sharp teeth, and nine tails then it suddenly hit him.
"Y...Yo...You are the nine-tailed fox Kyuubi." squeaked out Naruto.
"Took you long enough."muttered Kyuubi.
"Then you're the one who made my life miserable, aren't you."
"Then I only have one thing to say." stated Naruto.
"And what would that be?" asked Kyuubi.
Then Naruto started shouted out obscurities and curse words that would make a sailor blush while giving off a large amount of killing intent that would have scared the mightiest of devils and give any normal humans a strait out heart attack. After Naruto was done shouting out his obscuraties the only thing Kyuubi could say was.
"Damn. That was some pretty big killer intent. If I was human ,Kami above I am not anymore, that would have killed me. So kit listen up I have a cave in Kemurigakure or Kemuri for short. It is full of scrolls, weapons, money, and clothes so you can get rid of that jumpsuit. It just screams kill me please. It probably glows in the dark as well as well as get you out of the Hidden Leaf Village."
"I will do it on three conditions." stated Naruto in a cold voice.
"Go ahead shoot."
"One I want to know what the village's name is, two you have to tell me why you attacked Konoha, and three you tell me who my parents were." said Naruto.
"Do you really want to know who your parents were?" Asked Kyuubi in a nervous voice.
"Yes I do." stated Naruto.
"Are you really sure"
"YES GODDAMMIT I WANT TO KNOW WHO THEY WERE! yelled Naruto. "I"V ALWAYS WANTED TO KNOW WHO MY PARENTS WERE I NEVER HAD A FAMILY AND I DON"T CARE IF THEY'RE ALIVE OR DEAD I JUST WANT TO KNOW! screamed Naruto. "Please I just want to know." said Naruto as tears started to roll down his eyes and started shaking uncontrollably.
"Fine I'll tell you just please stop crying I hate it when I see people cry."Said Kyuubi as he tried to console the crying Naruto.
After Naruto calmed down Kyuubi told him the information Naruto waited eight years for.
"Naruto your parents were some of the most powerful people in this village, your father was Mamito Namakaze the Yodaime Hokage and your mother was the top ANBU black ops captain Kinsha Uzumaki or better known as the red death. She was famous for her long red hair and her strong willed attitude she was even respected by most of the minor demons."said Kyuubi.
Naruto was stunned I mean its not every day you find out that your the son of the two most powerful shinobi in the world. Naruto's reaction was just like the first only not as colorful.
"YOU HAVE TO BE FUCKING KIDDING ME MY FATHER WAS THE YODAIME HOKAGE AND MY MOM WAS SOMBODY RESPECTED EVEN BY DEMONS!" yelled Naruto with all the rage he could muster.
"KIT CALME DOWN AND I"LL EXPLAIN!" yelled Kyuubi.
"Well you better explain then furball!"
"Furball I resent that but that's besides the point, listen your father had many enemies from both Iwa and Konoha. Now during the third ninja war he killed many Iwa nins with a technique I've never seen before and that war is where he got the nick name 'The Yellow Flash'. So if they found out that he had a son they would take revenge on you."
"Now that does make sense but you said he had enemies in Konoha whats up with that?" asked Naruto.
"Your father's enemies in this rotten village were the Root organization that Donzo created, it was originally there for a special forces and deep undercover missions. I have head stories from those sent to hell that the ANBU Root was the most feared yet the most respected of all the ANBU but it was not to last. Root was supposed to be disbanded years ago after the Third Hokage found out about its illegal activities including sabotage of allied defense so they could take over. This was only found out when Root invaded a small neighboring ally of The Hidden Leaf village known now as the land of rice before that it had a hidden village called Hidden Sound Village. As we know, Root is up and running again this time under more secretive terms. The very man who found it is leading it yet again kit be werry of this man he is just as dangerous as a man named Orochimaru who he plans to join to take over The Hidden Leaf Village."
"What about my mother?" Asked Naruto.
"Your mother was a captain of the ANBU black opps so not much is known about her exept that she was deadly on the battlefield. She was known for keeping her secrets and sticking to her word no matter what the cost. She was originally from The Hidden Whirlpool Village but it was destroyed by Iwa in the last great war.
"Okay then that makes a lot of sense now why did you attack Konoha?"
Kyuubi stiffened but Managed to say, "Believe it or not I hate fighting thought it was pointless, I settled down with my mate Kikyo and went off hunting one day to get some food for her and my unborn kits. When I came back I found her dead and saw the very man who I gave the accursed Saringan to. He tricked me into mutating his Buyakugan into that accursed bloodline. He used the bloodline to control me to attack The Hidden Leaf Village in all of my rampage. He goes by the name Uchiha Mandara. For now avoid him at all costs for he is stronger than he looks. "
Kyuubi I'm sorry for your loss and I will kill Mandara for causing the pain he put us through believe it!" said Naruto.
"Thanks kit I will help you in anyway I can."
"Now for my last question what is the village's name and where is it?"
"Its The Village Hidden in the Smoke where they have this special stone that gives you amazing powers beyond your wild imagination. In Demon standards that is an object of immense power that soposobly came with the legendary sixth realm sage to this realm and made the ninja villages into what they are today."
"Really what does it do?" queered Naruto.
'Kit here's some examples this stone can give a person to become an element, for example a person can become fire and use its attacks another one is metal where a person's body becomes hard as well... metal. Its random though and only their villagers can use these powers."
"But I'm from this village how can I access that kind of power?" asked Naruto.
"Simple you have to through a sacred ritual to become a villager and if you betray them you die."
"Gee thanks for the warning, now I'm going to write a letter to the old man and telling him I'm leaving this village. By the way which way is the village anyway?
"You go west kit. Oh and by the way kit can you please change the senery in here a little bit. It gets dull after a while just with the plain old sewer look."
Naruto looked at the mighty beast with a questionable look and just thought of something nice. A great wind picked up and gone was the cold and musty sewer and it was replaced by a field with many different types of trees and landscapes. The Kyuubi looked at the boy with stunned eyes and before he knew it he turned buck to his humanoid form with nine long red tails and red fox ears. He smiled a guanine happy smile and said "Wonderful job kit it wouldn't surprise me if you would pass off as my own."
"Thanks Kyuubi-sensei." Naruto cheered happily.
'Sensei hmmm... I like that thanks kit.' thought Kyuubi
Later that night Naruto took what ever possessed and left Konoha not to be seen again for four years.
Woot done with the revisions in the first chapter that was a handful and all but I guess I still have it in me. I any one can please review or give me a pm on how I did with the revisions. Press the review button I know you want to. Please tell me if you like the change I like to here from my readers.