After many, many reviews telling me about the mistakes in the first 3 chapters, about 1918 and how they did not have the technology i described, i have finally taken the time to fix each chapter up.
So the first three chapters have been rewritten.
Thank you to all the reviews about this, i'm sorry it took awhile to finally fix.
If there is anymore problems, please do not hesitate to review.
Thanks, and enjoyy!