This is a poem I wrote about Edward Elric. There's not much more to say here... If you read it, please review it!
Edward Elric--Nothing Left
On your knees
Cries of sorrow
'Give him back!'
Colors of failure
Blood red and black
You never hide your face in shame
Although you know you were to blame
Foolish dreams by selfish means
Children aren't meant to suffer such things
Burdens too heavy
On shoulders too small
Yet if you could you would carry it all
Now what you've done is in the past
You want to bring him back at last
You try too hard
Begin trying anew
To undo the damage you have done
And give him back
What he gave to you
To chase a dream to failure doomed
You both blame yourselves
But you know what is true
All he has left
I lied, it's also about Al. But Ed is the main focus, as always. I really should write one about Al...
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