Hi, guys! I'm really excited for uploading my very first story. Take into account that I don't speak English, so if you find some mistakes, I'm very sorry! :) Hope you enjoy reading this story, it's BREAKING DAWN, all Stephenie Meyer creation, the characters and most of the dialogues.
I decided to write on Edward's point of view, cause, of course, I love him as many girls, too. Well someone had told me that I'm on the right way, so I hope she's right. Let me know what you think and if I should continue. I already wrote two chapters, so if I received good critics, well, just telling me to continue I'll upload them in the week. They're ready!
Again, I don't own TWILIGHT. I'm just a fan.
This is a re-uploaded chapter, it is corrected from its grammar mistakes by an amazing person who offered to help me make all of this story much better and so it would make you read this and love it.
Thank you so much to my great and wonderful Beta at123. =))
Would I have the sufficient force?
The control on my emotions, the control to turn the person I loved more than my own life, the one that I would love until the end of my days?
I did not know, and it terrified me in the most terrible way, the possibility of losing her. But I had already committed another horrible mistake. I, after all my efforts for protecting her, had subjected her to the worst damage and pain; I had made it come to the point of her dying.
But I could not do anything against what was killing her.
How to fight against it, when to do so, would kill her?
She was simply a magnet for danger, and she was still pulling me towards her. Will there ever be a day that I will stop hurting her, with my love or my strength?
Well, that was just the preface.
I'll be waiting for the reviews.
So exciting... thanks for reading!
So, what do you think, better?