For those who still have an alert to this:
I have redone this story. I have fixed major and minor mistakes, but I have also added/taken away events to/from the plot and overall story.
If you wish to reread in order to see what I have changed, that would be wise because the information that I added will contribute to the sequel and as much as I love reviews and questions, the story could be able to explain for itself.
Thank you and may your creativity keep your own Muses awake and alive,