Title: Will You Remember Me?
Summary: Poem in Marian's POV as Robin leaves for the Holy Land.
Disclaimer: Robin Hood is not mine. Believe me, if it was things would be different.
Started: Friday, 5 March 2010 20:43
Finished: Friday, 5 March 2010 20:48

Challenge from one of my friends. I had to write a poem in five minutes, just to prove I can do it. So here it is!

Will You Remember Me?

Why did you do it?
Why did you leave?
We had all we needed
Right here at this place

Right here is home
Out there is danger
No place you can call home
Nowhere but here

What will happen to you?
Will you meet your maker?
Will you wait for me at the pearly gates?
If you leave this homely earth

Don't leave, a prayer
A prayer you don't hear
I whisper it to the stars
And I whisper it to the sun

The moon is it the same there?
Or is it larger, smaller?
Will you remember me
When you gaze at the moon and the stars

Don't leave, a prayer you leave for dead
You left, leaving me behind
Will you ever come home?
And will you remember me?

The End

So what do you think? Is it a bit too much? Was betting I could do this a mistake? Or is it perfect? Please review?