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It was 4th period. The day had gone by quite fast and I was surprised it's already the end of the day. I was watching the clock waiting for the bell to ring. I wanted to get home. I don't like school that much, I find it very boring and tedious. I looked at the clock. 3:45, just then the bell rang. Right on time. I thought. I jumped up out of my seat and headed for the door. Just as I walked out of the classroom I was pounced on by my friend Hinata. She had me on the floor in seconds. I'm stronger then her but when im not on guard she can have me down quickly. She gasped and got up.

"Oh I'm sorry Sakura!" She said as she helped me up. I looked at her she was blushing and smiling.

"It's alright just be careful ok?" I said loudly over the commotion of the other students. "Cmon lets go outside!" She led the way outside as I trailed closly behind her. Outside it was sunny, like it has been. Hinata dragged me over towards the field.

"Haruno-chan your never gonna believe this!" She started jumping up and down excidedly.

"What what? What is it?" I pretended to be excited for her so she wouldn't think I wasn't supportive.

"Naruto asked me out! We are going ice-skating this Saturday!" She squealed. I sighed. Hinata looked at me with confution.

"What is it, Haruno-chan?" Hinata asked. I looked at her and smiled, even though I didn't mean it.

"Oh it's nothing Hinata, Im happy for you!" I said happily. Suprising how no one can tell if im really upset, i smile all the time so no one would be able to tell if im happy or not. I wish there was at least one person who can see through my fake smiles...

We walked back towards the parking lot full of buses. Lucky for me I live down the street from school so i don't have to ride the bus all the time like some other people. Hinata has to ride the bus so she ran off to meet up with Naruto before she left. I started walking home. I was looking off to the right at the trees and when i turned my head to the left i jumped. Sasuke was walking beside me.

"Hello, Sakura." He said casually. I glared at him.

"Stop scaring me like that!" I yelled at him. He chuckled.

"Ya know if people were around they would think your crazy. Talking to nothing but air."

"Well there's not people around and i know im not crazy so there!" I thought about what i said and realised that made no sense whatsoever. He laughed again. We didn't say anything for about 5 minutes. It got sort of awkward but I had that safe feeling all around me like i do when he's near me. I love this feeling. It's like i don't have to worry about kidnappers or anything like that when im walking by myself, but im not by myself thats just the thing. I looked up at the sky and kept my head up wile still walking. The sky was a nice deep blue and there weren't any clouds in the sky as usual. I like today. It was different from the other sunny days that normally come through here. We haven't even had one cloud in the sky since last month. I like this weather but honestly i really think we need some rain. I stopped looking up at the sky when i ran into a telephone pole.

"Ow!" I screamed. I quickly looked over at Sasuke, who was laughing.

"Why didn't you warn me?" I asked him. He looked at me, still laughing and said,

"You need to watch where your going, Sakura." He said calmly. I noticed something about him. He's the only one that calles me Sakura. Everyone else will ocasionally call me that but everyone says "Haruno-chan" and i dont know why. I hadn't really noticed it until now.

I walked up to my house and looks in the driveway. No car or van there, that means no one is home... I got out my key and unlocked the door and i went in a heavy wind blew in my face, nearly knocking me over. I steadied myself and went to my bedroom. After i put my stuff down i wondered into the kitchen looking for a light snack. I got out a poudding cup from the fridge and headed outback. Sasuke followed. I sat down on the hammok and ate my poudding. Nothing has been said, just silence. Then i heard rustleing in the house. I looked up from my poudding and listened carefully. Sasuke looked alarmed as well.

"Do you know what it is?" I asked quietly. Sasuke shook his head.

"Stay here." He commanded. I did as i was told. He walked up into the house and dissapeared. Nothing but the sound of the wind and birds surrounded me. Then i heard a loud crash. I jumped off the hammok and ran inside. I heard clattering of metal, like the sound of swords hitting each other. I followed it into the den. Then i saw it. I saw the demon that was twice the size of Sasuke. It had dark eyes and nothing but a black body. A horrid stench came over me and i nearly vomited. Sasuke glanced at me wile fihgting the demon and yelled out,

"I told you to stay outside!" He continued to fight the monster. "Go back outside and wait!"

I wanted to do what he said but i couldn't pull myself to move. I was paralized with fear. I tried moving my legs but they wouldn't budge. I was trembling and breathing heavily. I couldn't take my eyes off such a monster. Sasuke pinned it to the ground and glared at me.

"What are you just standing there for Sakura? Run!"

My legs were moving now, slowly, but they were moving. Sasuke took his sword and sliced through the demon's mouth. It vanished into thin air. Sasuke was on one knee hanging on to his sword for support and panting. He looked at me. I gasped. He got up and put his sword away then walked over to me. I was still paralized and couldn't move. I didn't have that safe feeling i get from him. He picked me up and carried me to my bed. He lay me down gently and walked out of the room. About 3 minutes later he returned with a towel and a blanket. He moved my hair out of the way and put the towel down on my head. He then leaned down next to me.

"Please, Sakura... Try to relax." Sasuke said calmly. I tried to but i guess i was in an adrenaline rush or something. My body refused to calm bent down next to my head and whispered something. I didn't exactly know what was going on but all of a sudden white petals started falling on top of me and vanishing as they hit the floor. Some of them evaporated into me. My body then calmed down. I felt secure and safe again. I took a deep breath and finally relaxed.


I am almost done with this chapter! i hope you like the rest of it (well what i wrote anyways) please enjoy! i will finish writing tomorrow! :D thanks for being patiant remember! Review Add Comment!