HELLO EVERYONE I APOLOGIZE BUT THIS IS NOT A CHAPTER! Its an AN….
I have tried to post to Twilighted but I received the following letter:
Your recent submission of "Honey-Lilacs and Freesias in a Cloverfield : PROLOGUE: There's Nothing You Could Say...This is a Good Day" to Twilighted did not meet our requirements for submission due to the fact that it had numerous problems with the following issues:
_X_ Phrasing/sentence structure (see first example for Punctuation below)
_X_ Punctuation (You are missing a lot of punctuation, and there are major issues with punctuation around dialogue. Examples:
"Six-forty-two a.m…" A velvet voice whispers quietly, walking through an apartment, towards a window that over looks Manhattan, the sound of his bare feet padding on the hardwood floor .
It SHOULD be:
"Six-forty-two a.m…" a velvet voice whispered quietly, as the man walked through an apartment, towards a window that overlooked Manhattan, the sound of his bare feet padding on the hardwood floor.
That fixes the phrasing (the velvet voice whispered, but the MAN walked through an apartment) and the tense (see Tense below).
_X_ Spelling (I don't believe you even ran this through a spell checker.
Example: appartment should be apartment; stawberry should be strawberry; relfections should be reflections-it actually should be reflection, not reflections, but still...
_X_ Tense (Your chapter switches from present tense to past tense continuously. You should pick one and stick with it. Example:
"Seriously, I can just see this ending up on the internet." She mummbles putting her head into the pillow as she pulled the bedsheet tighter around herself.
You have mumbles (spelled right here...), which is present tense, and pulled, which is past tense.
_ Word choice/usage
_ Canon Issue
_ Plot not plausible
_ Unoriginal Content
_ Inappropriate Content as per site Rules
_ Overall writing style
_ Technical error/file corruption- please resubmit chapter
_ Other: _
Please please get a proper beta. They will help you learn the rules for proper writing.
SO THEREFORE I WILL NOT BE POSTING ANYTHING ELSE ANY MORE CHAPTERS UNTIL I GET A BETA AND IMPROVE MY WRITNG SKILLS. I AM SORRY IF YOU DISAGREE BUT I CANNOT STAND BEING MEDIOCRE AND ACCORDING TO THIS, I AM. I WILL CONTINUE TO WRITE CHATPERS BUT I WILL NOT POST THEM UNTIL THEY CAN BE SENT TO A BETA OR EDITOR.
MY BETA WILL GET CO AUTHOR STATUS. ANYONE INTERESTED OR KNOW ANYONE INTERESTED, PM ME, REVIEW THIS AN.
I hope all my readers stick with me during this; the quality of my stories are not up to my standards or the standards of the fan fiction community as well.
*This chapter will be replaced with chapter 3 when this problem is fixed.