First Alice In Wonderland fic! Very excited for this one. I hope to update this soon, but I want to see if anyone will read this. This is just a short little starter paragraph to see if anyone will read this. Please leave your comments and ideas. God knows I need them.

Thank you

Forever-Remaining-Unknown

Bpov

I felt lost. I had nobody to go to. Jacob has been avoiding me. The hole has been getting bigger and bigger. I've been seeing Edward more and more to the point that I don't want to see him anymore.

I stepped over to the edge, the cliff a savior. It would save me from this madness. I heard a rustling in the bushes. I swirled and saw a flash of white. I whimpered out, "Leave me alone!"

The bushes rustled again. I yelled out, "Why can't you let me die in peace."

The bushes stopped rustling as a White rabbit in a Waistcoat appeared. I gapped. The rabbit pulled a shiny, gold watch from his pocket. Then, as if this couldn't get any weirder, he spoke. "Oh Dear, We're late!"

He hopped over to me and grabbed my hand and started pulling my hand. He spoke again, "Come, Come we must hurry!"

I stumbled after the rabbit more than slightly confused. I managed to ask, "Where are we going?"

He spoke, "We'll to Underland of course!"

I spoke again, "What's Underland?"

He scoffed, "Upperlanders. Just follow and stop asking questions."

Slightly miffed, "Well sorry for wanting to know where we're going."

Soon we had arrived to a large tree. In front of the tree was a large rabbit hole. The last thing I saw before I fell was a large russet colored wolf.

What do you think?