I've posted The Sealed Blade of the Spiral Ninja's rewrite under the title of Rage of The Maelstrom. This time, everything major is planned out, and the changes to Naruto's personality take place far earlier than they did in the Sealed Blade, making for a far more realistic scenario I believe. I've also changed Naruto's ever-generic dream, and did a better job of explaining Anko's age. Take a look and tell me what you think. Also, somebody, anybody, read and review Serene Angel. Its hastily written and riddled with mistakes I'm sure, but I would like it if somebody told me how I handle intimate romance!