Holli: Um.. This was the first Fanfic I ever wrote, I was 12 at the time, so please be nice and review.
Becca: Yes! And tell her how crap this fic is. Even if she does use me as a character in it.
Holli: It's not THAT bad..... I hope.....
Bakura is gonna be so surprised to find out that I got the afternoon off work. Thank goodness that I have a nice boss who actually appreciates that you should spend Valentines Day with your loved ones.
About two months after Bakura had got his own body, we had confessed our feelings for each other (Of course, I had told him first, he was much too proud), and since then, we had had a very steady relationship. I loved him very much. Over the past two years we had shared so many special moments. We had moved into a new apartment on the 7th floor of this fancy building on the outskirts of Domino city. I had made Bakura promise that he wouldn't steal anything from the other tenants and he had grudgingly agreed.
The only downside about living here, was that the elevator was temporarily out of order, so I had to climb these 7 flights of stairs, with the flowers I had bought, after a long walk too actually get here, from work.
I knew it was worth it though, I thought to myself as I fumbled with the key in the lock, nearly dropping the flowers as I stepped through the door.
"Oooooh…….mmmmmm, that feels so fucking good, Marik." I heard Bakura say. What's Marik doing here? I thought to myself. And what does Bakura mean?
I quietly crept through the kitchen and into the sitting room, trying to surprise Bakura. But what I saw made me gasp quietly and my eyes swim with tears.
There, on the sofa, amongst all the mess that they had made, were Bakura and Marik. But that wasn't the worst part. No, they had to be shagging each other didn't they.
How could Bakura do this to me? And on Valentines Day, for fucks sake. And I NEVER swear. I thought, from my hiding place around the corner. I leant against the wall and slid down it, dropping the flowers on the floor. I silently crept out the flat, tears spilling down my cheeks, and vowed to never see Bakura again. And I knew, for that to be possible, that I had to go away. Far, far away.
Becca: Poor Ryou :( *Gives Ryou a hug*
Ryou: *Awkwardly hugs back*
Becca: I can't believe you did this too my fave character :(
Holli: It gets better, I promise. What did you think? Please review. (BTW, is it obvious that I wrote it when I was 12?)