Sorry this isn't a chapter guys, but I wanted to respond to a bitchy coward.
Someone reviewed this story, as a GUEST, had the audacity to insult and flame me, because they are have Gaara's Gourd shoved up their ass.
At first, when I read the review, I laughed, I found it funny. I agreed! I know my stories have tons of errors like grammar, that why I am RE-WRITING THEM dipshit. I wrote these stories years ago, of course they have errors. But then as I read more of the review, I got annoyed, and now I'm angry.
This is what they said.
"Good god, GET A BETA! Grammar all over the place that makes your story unreadable! And what is with the essay of a/n? This is way too off-putting and unnecessary.
BTW, I came across you after leaving a string of flames on a Harry/Draco story, calling the author 'appalling' for miscalculating the number of Hogwarts students in a year, then also criticising the author about being petite. It made you look petty and stupid, so I checked out your stories to see if you were so perfect... and guess what? You're not.
Not nice to be flamed, is it? Have a nice day, now ;)"
And what bothers me THE MOST!
IS THAT THE LITTLE BITCH DIDN'T HAVE THE FUCKING BALLS TO REVIEW SIGNED IN! NOT AS A GUEST! –glares-
The story "The Bitch" speaks of is a little series, Harry Potter, in which Harry had MPD (multiple personality disorder) and Snape mentors him and stuff (personally I don't like Draco/harry, but the story is so good I'm willing to put up with it) I'm in the second volume now.
To the reviewer.
I made it clear in my review that I meant no offense, ALSO made it clear that I wasn't insulting the author.
They made a mistake, I pointed it out. You gotta problem with that, you sorry excuse of a worm?
If an author can't handle a mistake being pointed out, they shouldn't even be here.
I don't flame stories. I think its stupid. And when I am especially irritated at what an author has done, depending on what it is, I get frustrated, but no matter how much the review MIGHT seem like a flame, I ALWAYS make it clear that I mean no personal offense. I am just an honest person. I DON'T LIE! Why? I don't LIKE IT! So when I review, I am FUCKING HONEST! I don't care if you don't like it or not.
You may not like what I said, but at least I said it TO YOU. And Honestly! Flat out, truth.
By the way, I would get a beta, but I have no idea how that works.
The reviewer also accused me of calling the author appalling, when I said the MISTAKE WAS APPALLING! LEARN HOW TO READ FUCK HEAD!
Criticizing the author about being petite? Are you fucking kidding me? HOW THE FUCK CAN YOU CALL A 5'6" TALL MALE PETITE?!
I WAS CALLING MYSELF PETITE! I WAS EXPLAINING HOW I KNEW THAT ERROR.
I'm a fucking midget! Ask my brother! He calls me Oompa Loompa!
But calling an average height teenage boy 5'6" tall, petite? That was a mistake, I told the author about it. And I didn't fucking insult them saying either.
Dumbass, I wasn't leaving a string of flames, I was REVIEWING! IF I HATED THAT STORY TRUST ME YOU'D KNOW!
BUT I DON'T! I LOVE THAT STORY, ITS EFFING AWESOME! I LOVE HOW THE AUTHOR TAKES CANON EVENTS BUT MAKES IT THEIR OWN! I LOVE THAT AUTHOR! THEY ARE AMAZING!
I noticed mistakes in how they write sometimes, one second Shadow is acting a certain manner, the next its like hes a different person (this has nothing to do with Shadows MPD)
By the way guys, I'm changing The Orphan plot a bit, but if there is something you like that you want to stay the same, tell me, and I'll see if I can change it if it doesn't interfere with the new plot.
Don't worry guys, the story is gonna be a lot less confusing and OOC.
I feel better now Hey, happy face!
I know I'm not posting as frequently as youd guys like, but I've been busy. Piano, school, chores, preparations to take exams. If anyone of you guys are a geometry wiz, please tell me, I could use help. My mom sucks at it.
Hopefully, the new chappy will be coming soon!
As for you. Whoever left that guest review better crack open a book and LEARN TO FUCKING READ WELL!
-smiles cheerfully- bye guys!