Hello, everyone!

My goodness, it's been a long time since I've lloked at this story! Well, as I looked over it, I decided that maybe it was time to revise it. So, here we are! Chapter One of Revised 'Not a Fairytale Love Story'!

Chapter One


Everyone thinks that love is like a fairytale. Love is meeting by chance and feeling the attraction immediately. Love is walks on the beach and romantic dinners. Love is when everyone is happy for you and nothing can tear you apart.

Well, everyone is WRONG.

My name is Sakura Haruno, and I'm in love.

Even though we didn't meet by chance, and we didn't feel the attraction immediately. Even though we didn't go for walks on the beach and eat at romantic restaurants. And no one approves of us, and we have been torn apart. Our relationship started out twisted, sick, WRONG! But everything came out in the end, and now I have a wonderful future to look forward to with a man who loves me, and I love in return.

Even though neither one of us will ever admit it out loud.

We met on the battle field. And before you ask, no, we weren't allies. He was the enemy.

We fought for an entire day before either of us faltered. And, of course, it was me who faltered. He took advantage of it and knocked me out. When I woke up, I was tightly bound and sitting against a tree with a black robe with red clouds draped lazily over me. I looked around, waiting for my eyes to adjust to the darkness. When they did, I saw two figures. One was asleep and the other was watching for enemies. The one watching for enemies didn't turn, only stated:

"If you try to escape I will kill you."

I growled and tried to wiggle out of the ropes. They tightened. Chakra ropes. I swore.

"If I have to kill you Leader will not be happy. I'm sure your friends would not be happy either. Especially the Kyuubi container. What do you want to bet he could do something rash if he heard of your unfortunate demize?"

In that moment I hated him. I hated him more then his bastard brother ever could.

"Fuck you," I spat.

In the blink of an eye I was pinned to the tree.

"I would watch what you say, kunouchi," he hissed.

"My name is Sakura," I growled back," and fuck you."


He dropped me and walked off.

"Kisame. Get up."

The blue man stood and stretched his arms.

"Get the hostage."

"Right," he growled and tossed me over his shoulder.

They traveled to a small cottage I recognized from a mission in the past and felt so stupid. They hid right in the middle of one of the busiest roads to Kusagakure!

"Kisame. You are free to do as you please."

The shark-like man set me down in front of Itachi and chuckled.

"Yeah, I've been meaning to go to the brothel for a while now. Have fun, Itachi-san."

He grabbed my bound wrists and pulled me inside the cottage. It was completely dark for a moment before the lights automatically came on. He took me to a room and pushed me inside. It was a bathhouse.

"There are towels in the pantry. Do not stay in the water too long or I will be forced to come get you out."

I grumbled and complied. As soon as he left I looked for an escape route. None. I sighed in defeat and decided to take the bath the Akatsuki member had offered.

When my skin was as clean as I could get it and my hair was as silky as silk itself, I got out and dried off. I noticed the clothes sitting there that hadn't been there before.I put them on and opened the door to the hall way. Itachi appeared and grabbed my hand, pulling me down the hall to another room. This one was a bedroom.

The walls were bare and there were only necessities in the room. A bed clad in black and red, an oak desk and wardrobe combo, and a small bedside table with one drawer.

Just like Sasuke's apartment.

He took me to the bed and attached a collar with a chain on it to my neck, even though I struggled. When I tried to take it off it zapped me.

"It will intensify every time you try to remove it."

I growled and lunged at him. He lunged at me at the same time and pinned me to the bed.

"Now, about that fuck you were talking about earlier..."

My eyes widened.

I know, not all that different from the original, but I will change and add more as the chapters roll on, so please continue reading, and let me know what you all think!