I've had to take this down to amend it. The story was removed by FFN for being a naughty girl and breaking the rules.

They have given me 24 hours to amend/delete or they will remove it permanently…So, I am now re-working and will have it up soon!

Hopfully, FFN will be nice and leave me alone now…..Then again, I got stung the same day as near enough every author I know got done.