Okay, I've taken into consideration what everyone has reviewed (72 of them! Thanks so much!) and I will try my best to get this story going again. I don't have the time or patience to go back and fix all my errors or be as accurate with times and distances as I was, but I hope I can continue to do this story justice. You will all just have to be very patient with me, haha
Only 4 months of college left! Yay!