Hi. Sorry to interrupt the story. I've temporarily taken down chapters 4 and 5 as part of revising the whole story. It seems posting a complicated story about Wash and Jayne's respective spiritual journeys chapter by chapter when you haven't really worked the whole thing out first is a bad idea. I think with this one I'd better finish the whole story offline first, to avoid exactly the problem I am now having with chapters 4 and 5. Wish me luck! I appreciate everyone's patience.

Ella