Fans i need you help!

i havent worked on this story (or ANY other stories) for so long i've lost my taste D: i dont want to leave you guys hanging like this, so i ran back to my netbook and now im asking for you help! please give me your opinions and ideas! it'd help!


just to give you an idea where i left off, gin chan gets an idea from a tv love drama how to solve this complicated problem with his 'crush'. however when he gets there at the station, he finds out hijikata is in critical condition of... unhealthiness. what should happen now?

oh and here's a little snippet to give you an idea. this is where i had no idea what to wrte on:

"What else? I got a thing to settle with your beloved vice commander."

Gintoki stopped when he felt a strong hard hand on his shoulder. He turned around to face Kondo looking at him with a very stern expression. Gintoki sweated.

"Wh-what? Did I say something wrong? Do I have something on my face?"

Kondo blinked, as if he didn't know he had such 'look' on his face and took his hand away, gently shaking his head.

"No, it's just that, Hijikata came 'home'… and we've never seen him so…. 'broken'."

Gintoki stared at the captain for a while. "…What?"

Kondo gave the younger man a wry smile. "Well, he came home with injuries I've never seen, and he had this fever, and…" kondo drifted off, not knowing exactly how he should explain this.

Gintoki had no reply. The hairy man that stood before him was so quiet and worried over the fukutaichou, It seemed rather hard to tell the man in front of him that it was actually HIS fault.