Hey Everyone! I have decided for the 3rd Time! … I Know! To rewrite this story, I don't like where it is heading and Not everyone can follow my writing so I'm going to make it a lot more informative and Mobster-ish.
I have no Beta so any mistakes are my own, please don't point them out, I properly already know enjoy :D
"Bella, it's 5pm, you're free to go home now" my boss Siobhan voiced in my direction from the backroom of the bookshop.
"Ok, Are you sure there's nothing I can help you with before I leave?"
"No, No I'm fine, you have a good night" she smiled from the doorway.
I ran out of the Bookshop and into the rain, my University of Chicago hoodie soak through after about 3 steps. I shivered while I ran to my Chevy.
I drove straight to my house which I shared with my boyfriend of 3 ½ years, well I should say fiancée since he proposed only a week ago. He bought me a stunning heart diamond ring with blue sapphires sprinkled around the edge of the diamond and green emeralds spread out on the silver band. It must have cost him a fortune, nowhere near the 2-3 months' pay check that was usually done.
I smiled as I parked onto the driveway. The house was pretty small, with only 2 bedrooms but we were planning on buying a new house, a bigger house with his new inheritance. As I walked to the door I noticed a blue car parked on my driveway. I unlocked the door and curiously walked inside, as I stepped up the stairway I heard some loud banging coming from the master bedroom. As I walked towards the bedroom door, it was then, that I heard it.
"Ugh! Mike Right-Ugh There-Yeah Yeah! Oh My God-UGH!"
A female voice echoed through the landing. I walked up to our bedroom and slowly opened the door bracing myself. Once the door was opened wide enough I saw Mike with his face in between the legs of non-other than my high school best friend Jessica Stanley.
I was shocked. More than shocked I was frozen. Then I heard a scream and before I knew it, mike was on his knees in front of me begging me for forgiveness. I did what most girls do in this situation. I ran.
I jumped into my Chevy and drove as fast as I could; I ended up stopping near the local park. I walked over to the swings and started swinging back and forth staring into nothing. I heard some commotion from across the lake that many families use for fishing during the holidays. I saw three men, they looked a bit like they have all had one too many. I took no notice then I heard an ear-splitting sound.
I jumped. I turned toward the three men to see two of them throwing one body into the lake. I screamed in terror to what I just witnessed. Their heads turned towards me. For the second time that night I ran. I just made it to the truck and as I put my key in the ignition I was pulled out and onto the floor.
"please, please don't hurt me! I won't tell anyone I promise! I'll never tell anyone! Let me go home please!" I begged. But it was no use a big man with brown hair and a sympathetic expression of his face placed a white cloth on my mouth and nose.
"I'm sorry but I have no choice" he said. I breathed in the scent of some chemical and everything slowly turned black.
WHAT AN IDIOT! Is it so hard to understand that if I lend you money I want you to pay it back within a certain time limit? What kind of idiot thinks they can get away with it! Well this dude did. I just sent my two best men, James the very sadistic, perverted one and Emmett the benevolent one who just does what I say no questions but won't do any more than that, he also is my elder brother.
I heard my mobile go off. I answered it.
Hey Edward, it's Emmett.
Ok, What's the situation.
A Young Girl *cough* I mean Woman saw us kill that dude
Ok, where is she?
We have her with us, we used Chloroform, so she's pretty out of it.
Should we bring her to the warehouse?
No bring her to the townhouse.
OK, Boss we'll be there in about 1 hour and a half.
See You Then.
I hung up the phone. Looks like we have a visitor.
Sorry you have to reread things, although there have been changes :D I hope this version is a lot better! Please Review and tell me what you think :D