Hi, thank you all so much for the love and constructive criticism! I definitely appreciate what all of you have to say. I've been writing Miri I think more like myself than the character, but that's just my own personal writing style. Some of your reviews have been absolute day-makers; it's so nice to log on and find so much love! That being said, I doubt I'll be updating any time soon. This was a fluff piece I started when I was thirteen, and my writing is a lot different now. I would love love LOVE to hear from any of you about your writing, just message me or post a review! Thank you lovelies for all of your support and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.