So wow guys! I'm shocked! I had so many doubtful reviews, saying how this wasn't working out and that and talking about inconsistencies and what not. Now guys, do you REALLY think I would write a story like that? I think you need to have some more faith in me! Honestly!
The person who figured out my plot was Cool Person. Congrats. You should be proud- you're the only one who did!
And I'll explain their theory, which was exactly right:
Ok, so Lindsay was NEVER pregnant with Greg's baby. She just thought she was because, as it will say in here, she skipped her period and took a test that said it was positive. As you know, many women can experience pregnancy SCARES, and that the tests they take are not always RIGHT. And Lindsay only took one, and because she is stupid, she assumed that she was pregnant.
BUT, when she slept with Eli, still thinking she was pregnant, she didn't use any protection, because as you should know, you can't get pregnant when you're already pregnant. That would be…odd. Anyway, so when she slept with Eli, THAT is when she got pregnant. Thus, the reason why the baby belongs to Eli. Understand? I don't really know how to explain it further-PM me if you have more questions. Now, enjoy the epilogue! This is the end of Temptation- I really hope you enjoyed it!
AND ALSO I NEED MORE SEQUEL NAMES- The ones that people gave me are great! I would really appreciate more!
And I also need baby names. As you know, it's a girl…so yeah! Give them to me, will you? Thanks!
Reviews are lovely, and PLEASE review and put your opinion in here. What I will probably do is choose the names I like most and make a poll to have people vote.
Ok! Enough talking! Read and enjoy!
"Hey Clare, it's me. Greg. Just wanted to let you know I got into New York safely and my train didn't fly off a bridge and crash or something. Ha-ha. I know we kind of left on a sad note, but I think I can cheer you up. I really don't want to ask you this, but are the police looking for me yet? Have they found any traces of where I might be? I feel like some criminal asking these questions, but that's apparently what I am to them, so I might as well play the game right. Ohhh-kay. So, call me back soon. Love you."
"Hey Clare, it's Greg again. So, it's been a couple of days, and you still haven't called. Maybe you're busy? Probably are. I guess you have better things to do than talk to me…even though, of course, I'm the most incredible person in your life…ha-ha. But seriously, please call me back as soon as you can. I'm getting a little concerned here…alright. Love you, bye."
"Clare, it's Greg. What's going on? You haven't called me back yet and it's been…a week. A week and three days, to be exact. I'm really worried about you. Please call me back…"
"Clare. What the hell is going on? I just called my parents…and they're beyond devastated. They said Eli is being held in custody, instead of me, because they think the baby is his. How is that possible? Did he and Lindsay have a fling? Why didn't he tell me? Why did he lie to me? Did you know? Why the hell didn't anyone let me know?"
"Clare…it's Lindsay. I don't know if you're taking any calls right now…because I knew you were pretty shaken up. I just want to say I'm so, so sorry. Let me explain. I really thought it was Greg's baby, because after him and I…you know, my period skipped, and I took a pregnancy test that came up positive. But I talked to the doctor…and he said that I probably wasn't, and I was just experiencing a pregnancy scare. He said that when Eli and I did it, though, that's when I became pregnant. I had no idea, so please. I'm so sorry."
"Hey, Clare. It's Adam. I just wanted to let you know that…I spoke to Greg…and he's pretty upset. He's trying to come back up this week, but you know, the train he has to ride on has tickets that are expensive. Anyway, I basically called to tell you to hang in there, okay? I'm here for you, your family is here for you. everything is going to be fine in the end, I promise. Have some faith. That's part of your religion anyway, isn't it? Well, just believe me. Call me back."
"Clare…it's me, Eli. I only have a minute to talk to you, so I'm going to make this fast. I need you to come testify for me. If I have a few witnesses, it will really help me. You know I didn't rape her. And I'm sorry, I'm sorry I made you think it was my kid, and then Greg's, and then mine again. I know I must have hurt you, and I don't deserve your help, especially since i…well, since I broke your heart. But please, Clare. I need you. And…tell you what. I'm going to tell Greg who I really am to you, whether he hates me afterwards or not. I'll tell him I was the ex-boyfriend who cheated on you and broke your heart. It's the least I can do for you. I have to go now. Please call me back, Clare. I'm so sorry."
Their lies were becoming cruel, each thing they promised in each voicemail. I stayed in my room, curled in a tight ball on my bed, gazing out the window. I had decisions to make, and I didn't even know where to start.
Decisions that you have to make only after you, or some, gives into the one thing we all fight hardest not to take.
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I will be back in a few months with a spanking sequel (and a name you will provide for it)
And also- baby names!
Thank you for reading and reviewing Temptation! I will see you all soon!
Special thanks to all my reviewers who reviewed every chapter. I love you all too :-)
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