A big thanks to elle, who always takes the time out to review my work. Thank you so very much, elle!
Here is my second poem, I hope whoever reads it enjoys :)
Again: I do not own Mai- HiME in any way, shape, or form
I damn that star with everything I have.
Just from that puny star,
My life has gone all bad.
That red star
With the HiME power,
Constantly comes closer
And blossoms like a flower.
Of course I met you
During the year
Where this all happens,
When the worst is near.
I want to run away,
But that would be no good.
I want to go back in time, with you
If only, if only I could.
Why can't I, myself, be a star?
Be out there, out in space and free?
I want to be out farther than Jupiter and Mars,
And I want you to be there with me.
If there had been just one more year
Before I met you,
Then you would have never disappeared,
And I would have had no fears.
But you're back now,
And for that I am glad.
You're back now,
And now I could never be sad.
This one could really apply to most of the Hime, I believe. But, again, who do you think I was basing it off of, originally? ;)
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