It's been a while, huh? A little over two years, actually.
Since, as I just said, it's been quite a while since I wrote this story, I would like to hope that my writing's a little more advanced than it was at the time of when I originally typed it out. For one thing, I hadn't had a lot of experience then and I've gone through a lot more trial-and-error since.
Basically, I'd like to rewrite this. I think I'm going to, and I think I'm going to very soon while I'm still motivated to do it. The plot would be the same, but there would be a few awkward lines that would be rewritten, some strange scenes that would be taken out or replaced, and some new things would be added in to make it smoother (for example, the ending, which was really fast).
If you really liked this story, please let me know the following:
1) Anything you didn't like
2) Any specific scenes/lines you want me to keep
3) Something you think I should add in
I won't say it will happen, but it lets me know what you all were interested in when you read it. If it was mentioned in a review, it's been marked down for consideration.