Ninja no Master: the master of the serpent

Author's notes: I seen not many of you voted for neither for Tamamo-no-Mae, Saber Lily or Arcueid nor Madea/Caster... so sad people... so sad... anyways I decided on something a bit... different, I will do them all, yes that's right. I will make a different fanfic for each servant XD if this sounds good pm me or review it XD. All the stories will have the same basic part as a start, however how they develop will be unique. I hope to exceed all your expectations.

A different look on a fate/Stay night fanfiction... By L33t Horo.

Chapter 1: Finding someone slithering in.

I run... I can't breath.

I dash, my legs true and swift...

however, I have little hope... as fast as I am, I am only but kid.

That and the pursuers are not regular people... they are shinobi

however, they are underestimating me... good, I can use this to my advantage.

I run from them and hide deep into the forest... I carry the scroll I took from the old man.

It pays that he is a pervert and I know how they think... I developed a technique especially designed for that kind of people.

Anyways... I am leaning from said scroll... I managed to learn kage bunshin... however the scroll had a secret in it... I sensed something on it... curiosity took the better of me and decided to look into it.

"Servant... summoning?" I read it confused at it.

I have heard of kuchiose no jutsu... but this one was different... it didn't summon an animal... I couldn't make the rest... but I decided... why not have an extra skill on me?

I never could have guessed how it would change my life...

My name is Uzumaki Naruto... orphan, Shinobi failure... I failed 3 times to graduate, my teacher Mizuki told me about a secret test...

This could be my chance to pass.

In retrospective I should have known better...

after reading the jutsu's explanation I did what it asked me... with my blood I made a circle around me and made the strange sings all over it, I poured my chakra into it... I picture in my mind...

"This jutusu said that it will summon someone to protect me... someone to help me... I want someone who will like me... someone who will not judge me... someone who will understand me... please... let it work" I pray in my mind.

I know Iruka cares... I know the old man Hokage and Ichiraku cares...and Ayame as well... but... they can't be with me all the time... I feel lonely at home, the empty cold room... the stares that are so cold... like they want to eliminate my existence.

I don't want to feel that way anymore.

"Spirits of far away... hear my call... if you find me worth... if you find me capable, answer my call" I state as the circle begins to shine... the air picks up with power, my chakra flares up as well as something primal... something inside me... but not a part of me.

"If you accept, I will be the light in the darkness, I will be anything good in this world... so answer my call... and come FORTH!" I yell as I put my arm up towards the moon.

"THERE YOU ARE! NARUTO!" A voice says

Naruto looks up the trees...

"IRUKA-SENSEI! I found YA!" Naruto said with a smile

"I FOUND YOU, YOU IDIOT!" Iruka yelled... he scoffed...

"Eh? Naruto... what are you doing?" Iruak asks as he saw the strange circle and signs.

"I was trying to do the kuchiose no jutsu... apparently I failed" Naruto said looking downcast

"Eh?" but why do you have the scroll?" Iruka asked

"Ah... Mizuki-sensei said that if I learned a jutsu from this scroll I could pass the test!" Naruto said

"Mizuki..." Iruka said

A wizzing sound came

"DANGER! GET OUT!" Iruka said as he shoved Naruto

"EH! IRUKA-SENSEI...WHA-?" Naruto yelled

"I am sorry..." Iruka said as he ahd his back pierced by a giant shuriken.

"Fool... protecting this idiot" Mizuki said with a sneer

"Na...Naruto... whatever you do... don't give him the scroll" Iruka said

"Naruto... do you know why you are hated by the village?" Mizuki said.

"MIZUKI! YOU CAN'T!" Iruka yelled

"Why... why am I hated?" Naruto said

"There is a law everyone know... everyone but YOU" Mizuki said

"MIZUKI STOP!" Iruka yelled... he coughed up blood.

"Everyone... but... why not me?" Naruto asked

"Because that law was regarding you" Mizuki said

"Regarding... me?" Naruto said... he backed a bit, he stood back once more were he did his failed summoning.

"yes... the reason you are hated... IS BECAUSE YOU ARE THE 9 TAILED FOX DEMON!" Mizuki said.

Naruto's leg's gave on his weight... he shivered in anger, rage... it all made sense

"ARRRG!" Naruto roared in pain as he flared his chakra wildly... he took the scroll with him and ran... he wanted to get away... it was too much.

Moments later

Mizuki and Iruka exchanged blows...

"Why do you protect him? Isn't he the demon who killed your parents?" Mizuki asked

"Yeah... I hate the demon" Iruka said in honestly.

Naruto who was hidding behind the treeline balled his fists... even Iruka hated him...

"Yeah... I hate the demon, but not Naruto.. he is clumsy and a bit dumb... but he is a hardworker, no Uzumaki Naruto... he is a proud citizen of Konoha" Iruka said

Naruto cried...

Mizuki then readied himself to finish off Iruka, as he was about to throw his shuriken.

Naruto rushed forth and punched Mizuki and by doing so made him let goof the shuriken and flew to another direction.

"Touch Iruka-sensei… AND I WILL KILL YOU!" Naruto said with his face with a snarl.


"A punk like you I'll kill in one shot!" Mizuki said

"Try it you piece of shit! I'll return the pain a thousand fold" Naruto said with a cold and steely gaze.

"Then do it demon fox!" Mizuki yelled

In the blink of an eye the forest was set ablaze with the color orange… everywhere you could see it was orange and yellow.

Naruto had successfully learned how to do the kage bunshin jutsu and now surrounded Iruka with a thousand copies of himself.

Mizuki was bewildered, he was confused and scared; no one noticed the seal was forming on the ground at Naruto's feet.

"What's wrong!" the clones and Naruto shouted "Weren't you going to kill me in one shot?"

Mizuki tried to crawl back, he was scared.

"Well then…" The clones said as they cocked their fists backs and pulled up their sleeves. "Guess I'll start things off then"

Mizuki then yelled in pain throughout the night.

After that Naruto turned around to tent Iruka's wounds and re-secure the scroll…

Naruto was tired… Iruka was surpised by this

"Naruto… close your eyes" Iruka said.

Naruto closed them and felt something soft on his fore-head.

"Congratulations… graduate" Iruka said as Naruto begun to tear up… however they heard something move… by then it was too late.

"YOU IDIOT! YOU FORGOT TO FINISH ME OFF NOW DIE YOU MISERABLE DEMON!" Mizuki yelled as he rushed towards Naruto.

They shuriken and kunai flew towards them both, Naruto grinded his teeth, he was about to die.

Time slowed down, each shuriken and kunai appeared as it was moving slow pace, almost still…

"So this is how it feels to die… when seconds becomes eternity itself…" Naruto said as he balled his fist….

He refused to die like this…

His anger, his rage, his desire to live and to protect Iruka, his dreams…. His chakra and the youki in him combined with the magic circle and a torrent of light came from Naruto's feet… the seal completed itself and the sound of hissing came forth…

Chains… the chains sourounded Naruto and Iruka from the onslaught of projectiles, then when it finally stopped a lone figure stood in front of Naruto.

Naruto was taken back, she was beautiful… but for some reason she seemed broken… he couldn't see her eyes but he could tell from the feel alone… she was like him.

The lady was a beauty to behold, her long violet hair reached to the floor and she moved with a seductive grace that beguiled and enchanted any man… she knelt down in front of Naruto.

"Servant Rider, per your summoning and calls have I answered… I ask of you, are you my master?" the lady asks.

Naruto's hand begun to burn and saw a symbol etching itself on it, it was the symbol of a 3 pronged kunai

"I see… you are indeed my master" the now mentioned Rider said

"My chains and chariot are yours, I shall ride and protect you fiercely from your enemies, your fate shall be mine, with my chains I shall snare and kill for you, with this our contract is now complete" Rider said

"I don't know were you came from… BUT GET AWAY FROM MY PREY!" Mizuki yelled

Rider then pulled something and a new set of chains with stakes appeared on her hands, with it she whipped it out and snared Mizuki.

"Don't you dare touch my master, trash" Rider said as she cut Mizuki using her chains and sheer power.

Blood dripped from her chains…

"What a horrible stench his blood has" Rider said as she turned to her master.

"Master, are you safe?" Rider asked

Naruto looked at the beauty that just saved him and felt his injuries and tiredness took his toll on him.

He passed out.

"Excuse me… Rider is it? Would you mind terribly helping me and Naruto out? We should go to a hospital or something" Iruka said.

"Yes… I sense my master trusts and has some feelings for you… I will help since my master would have asked me to do so as well" Rider said

And with that Iruka, Rider and Naruto (who was being carried by Rider) set off to go back to the village.

However could not help but think "Who was this woman, where has she come from... and most importantly... did she call Naruto "master"?" Iruka thougth as a small trail of blood trailed from his nose.

End of chapter

Author note's: Well this is it! The fic you been waiting for! I hope you don't mind the short amount of pages, but this is but the first chapter, I hope you enjoyed this short by albeit great chapter.

If you skipped the author note's at the top this fic will not only be of Rider.. I am doing another fic with Saber, Caster, Caster from Fate/extra, and of course Arcueid, I hope you enjoy my work, and also PLEASE not that my fic, Jinchuriki Fate Staynight is being redone… so if some incongruence occur do not worry… it is being re-worked so they all fit rather nicely.

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