AN: So, we're all familiar with the infamous, "My Immortal" story, Tara Gilesbie's loosely-acclaimed "Harry Potter" fanfic. But… what if there were less death threats to the author's sworn enemies, the preps, and what if there were fewer grammatical and spelling errors, and what if… what if the author actually had talent?
These questions will be answered in the next 44 chapters as I visit, scrutinize, critique, and rewrite every single chapter of "My Immortal". Excluding, of course, the parody chapter written by the hacker we all know and love… Who am I to screw with perfection?
Enough of that, let's get down to business. Enjoy this reiteration of "My Immortal".