Hi this is Yami Tasuki 3 this is my first fanfic and the only reason I'm writing this is because it has been annoying me for a long time now. Obviously I don't own Treasure island. If I did I wouldn't be here now would I.
Tell me honestly what you think…
Shep whistled at the sight below them. "Dude I can't believe were right above Los Vegas U.S.A!" Shep shouted to his friend. "Ow Julius this is amazing!"
In the seat next to him Julius Silver smiled. "Remember why were here Shep."
Shep smirked. His dark brown eyes twinkling. "Ya were looking for sailors in the middle of a dessert."
Silver smirked in reply. "Not just sailors my friend something better."
Shep nodded. "Sure, sure as long as you have the map."
Julius elbowed Shep in the gut. "Shut up you idiot!"
Shep just laughed at his friend. "Don't worry Julius, it's not like your grandpa is going to find out you stole the family treasure map and a part of his fortune." He said turning his attention back to looking outside the plane window. "I still can't believe your grandpa is General Kings…Your so…how do I put this nicely…"
"Shut up loser." Julius joked. "Look were landing." He said with an evil smile. "This is the beginning of a new era my friend…"
Kimma jumped of the building, onto something similar to a parade balloon clinging to her bag of loot with her life.
"Come back here Hawkins! Your under arrest!" Shouted the Sheriff O'Malley.
Kimma laughed, attempting to gain her balance. "Exactly why I'm not coming back."
Bullets shot past Kimma, making her fall flat on her face.
Kimma groaned, looking behind her, still griping the balloon desperately.
Behind her was at least 5 man in black older style suits, wearing masks to cover his face. The Los Vegas Mafia!
Kimma didn't need to see his face to know who he was, Livesey's…son second in command of the mafia.
Livesey's men kept fireing at her, as she got her grounds. There was noway she could take on the cops and the mafia!
Kimma screamed in pain!
Well I hope you liked page one, if you think this is worth continuing. (which I'm planning on.) Or if this is a waste my time just hit the review. And I'll get the next page as soon as I can. "Sorry it's short." Yami out.