Thank you. Really, thank you everyone.
I will rewrite the story, due to the overwhelming support that I received. Be warned - it will be a while. I decided to go through it slowly, planning ahead for once, and only in my spare time. I shall continue to focus on TWOT and 1995.
So keep this story on your alerts. It will change, all at once. That being said... can you please tell me your favorite parts? If it is not absolutely terribly wrong, I'll try to keep it in. I read a story once that was being rewritten that had my favorite part taken out, and I was really disappointed. Let me know!